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Post by Shawn Rabuburēdo on Mar 3, 2023 11:19:32 GMT -5
Character Name: Shawn Rabuburedo
Character Rank 2 (Vice Captain)
Why are you applying for Bankai? To progress his story and power
What makes your character qualified? He Trained for it
Qualifying Threads [Below, provide the links to eight threads of characterization which qualify your character for Bankai. At least one must be a Quest or Adventure reaching at least 3 pages. A completed Quest or Adventure counts for 2 threads. At least 3 must be completed after reaching Class 3, including a Bankai Solo Training Thread as the last.]
Additional Comments[ Through many difficulties, some losses and moments of humility, Shawn has persevered it all to obtain a power capable of allowing him to protect those dear to him. That is the reason he struggled to obtain Bankai, and will be the reason he strives to constantly improve himself in the future. Now at least, he's willing to accept help to get there.
Post by Zeich Yajuu on Mar 3, 2023 15:01:29 GMT -5
For the most part, all of this qualifies for Bankai. However, there is one thread I don't think counts in this particular case: Extra Credit. I did not feel any real growth or characterization in this one compared to all the others. He left as quickly as he came and didn't accomplish a whole ton. If you can justify the characterization in this one, or provide another thread with better characterization, then I can pass this.
Post by Jeff Franklin on Mar 3, 2023 15:08:02 GMT -5
So, the reason I included Extra Credit was due to the overwhelming loss he was dealt. This is really what pushed him into looking for a power boost as he was clearly to "Weak". So the character growth happened because of it, not during it. If you'd like I can try finding another, however, due to requirements I'll have to complete a different thread to get the third thread required above class 3. So if my reasoning still isn't enough just let me know and I'll work on it!