Edward König E the Execution [Vandenreich]

[Zeich Yajuu]

Sorry, I meant to get to this on Thursday, but things happened, and then I had guests all weekend. My apologies on the delay!

I think we're just about done, though I want to handle one more thing.

I didn't see the "Edward's body has the same Class as his Release" when I saw the ability before. I'm a little leery to pass this, because it lets you pay a small cost to give you some pretty solid immunities by making your body Clash and lacking the drawbacks that come with Blut (per-post cost, ability to be bypassed by final releases, etc). I can't pass this particular portion of the ability, sorry. XD

[Edward]

edits made

[Zeich Yajuu]

[Edward]

bumping because it's been two weeks since a mod update on this

[Johnwaluigi]

Alright, all of your sections seem sufficient for a Captain Supervisor application. As such, I will be focussing on the powers.

False Selee Schneide sets up an unusual amount of interplay between a Release and a non-Release technique that I’m not sure I’m happy passing so freely. As such, I’d like to see a boosted cost to Selee Schneide when using one of your false hilts as a base. I would recommend triple the cost to create and maintain the blade. Feel free to suggest an additional/alternative drawback.

Never Ending Blade seems good to me.

Unwasted Strength seems fine to me.

Thirteen Strikes seems reasonable. Though perhaps some kind of diagram is required. I find the explanation of how the extra blades orient themselves relative to the original blade a little confusing.

The Sharpest Blade is Myself this needs some kind of bypass mechanism/maintenance cost. My recommendation is that the durability of his body decreases by 10% per post, so that you can’t just turn on this property and be invincible. Of course, turning off the property and on again would refresh the durability.

Sense of the Blade seems fine. It’s a strong detection technique, but it is a fairly short range and high class, so I feel it’s fine.

There aren’t many changes here, but once my recommended changes are made, I’d be happy to give this my 2/2! Class 1, 1400 SP (400/700 Training SP), Captain Supervisor and Sternritter rank! Please bear in mind that your Vollstandig will have to be updated once those changes are made, but you can submit a free CIU once those rules are updated.

[Edward]

Posting ideas of changes:

False Selee Schneide: Triple the cost to create and the double the cost to maintain blade. Given that he gives up his cutting power for selee schnedie tech is a huge drawback already. Losing 1300+ cutting power for a weapon is a major drawback when you consider what you get out of Selee schedie in and of it's self. Yes this does allow him to not need the item the Selee schneide hilt, however unlike other quincy if edward is using this his reiatsu regain is cut compared to others just using the tech. 


The Sharpest Blade is Myself: durability of his body decreases by 10% per post, that he's actually hit. If not it makes little sense to have it degrade over time without actual contact.  Of course, turning off the property and on again would refresh the durability.


Thirteen Strikes  twelve pointed star original arrow would be the center rest of the strikes would be the points  

[Johnwaluigi]

I’m happy with all your suggested changes except the one to ‘The Sharpest Blade is Myself’. I think fatigue and strain are good enough reasons to justify the degrading durability, and it makes it at least possible for characters to try stall out and hit, rather than having to fight at a disadvantage constantly.

[Edward]

edits done

[Johnwaluigi]

Cool, cool! 2/2 approved, Class 1 Captain Supervisor Rank, 1500 SP!

[Edward]

Strength - [400]x3= 1201%Points

Speed - [273 ] 300 Points

Spiritual Pressure – [300] 300 % Points

Reiatsu Strength – [138]x.3= 50Points



Light Aura - [90] Points

Dark Aura - [10] Points

Instinct - [275].33=100 Points

Senses - [91]=100 Points

Energy sensory - [23]X3= 75 Points

Healing Expertise - [0] Points

Abilities

• [Strength of Will] {3}
• [Swords] {3}
• [Damage Recovery ] {3}
• [Battle Analysis ] {3}
• [shockwaves ] {3}

[Edward]

So originally when Edward was approved Vollstanding was very simple and didn't have all the properties it does now. I believe it was less than a week after that the changes to Vollstanding were made and I was told I could wait to add in the updated Vollstanding later on.  


Divine Form: Flight

Divine Power: Blades of the past In vollstanding each strike that Edward does allows him to summon three blades to follow the strikes he does. These blades will materialize and have the offensive power of his highest offensive stat. These blades act in the same manor as the strike. After a swing the blades hover around Edward and will continue to stay there till the next strike where they will follow the strike. Edward can make use of the blades by summoning them to his hand or firing them out by mental control as if they were arrows.

Divine Soul: Echos of quakes: The area around Edward in a space of 50 feet remembers all shockwaves that happen within it. Whenever a shockwave is created or fired odd the space remembers it and continues having the shockwave exist in that space till the end of Volstanding. The shockwave continues at the same strength and size.

Divine Heart: The Quincy gains a +25% boost to all stats.

[Edward]

Character Name: [Edward]



New Powers: 

False Selee Schneide: Edward's arrows turn his basic arrows from being made of reiatsu into solid spiritual steel versions of Selee Schneide. Each blade created by Edward has durability and offensive cutting power equal to his strength. These blades however also allow Edward to use the technique Selee Schneide through them acting as the hilts. Any Selee Schneide, be it the false ones he creates or the technique used through this property is able to have his other bow properties affect them. If another individual picks up the blades that Edward has created the OS and durability of the blade becomes that of the new user's physical strength, not reiatsu strength or Spirtual Pressure but physical strength, once leaving their control and back into Edwards it's strength is returned to normal.  If Selee Schnedie is used on a copy of false Seele Schneide his os is lost on it and it's propertyacts as a real Selee Schnedie. Activating seele scheedie costs three times as much as normal and mantaining it costs twice as much as normal.If the cost isn't paid the blade turns back to a normal flase selee scheide.









What kind of update: [ General update after speaking with Col about it]