Yetsuna Yishnir Squad 3 VC CIU

[Himitsu Kasumi'Oji]

Interesting… so her golem’s step techs bite into Yetsuna’s “reiatsu poo”

“The durability per unit thickness of her summoned or fortified earth is doubled meanwhile the costs for doing both is dropped by half.” I’m okay with all Yetsuna’s earth possessing a durability of 2x her offensive stat, but it shouldn’t exceed that number. I mentioned this in an earlier grading. With the way this is written, any earth with a thickness of 5 feet or more has 4x her offensive stat as its durability. 2x should be the cap.

After that final change, I can approve this.

[Yetsuna Yishnir]

Fixed the typo and there's a note at the end of the bankai section that says durability does not increase with thickness in bankai (I think you missed it the first time lol)

[Himitsu Kasumi'Oji]

The way it's written USB still misleading. It's strange to write "durability per unit thickness" when the earth durability doesn't scale with thickness in that stage of release. All you have to do is replace that clause with a clear statement that fortified earth has a durability of 2x her offensive stat.

[Yetsuna Yishnir]

done

[Himitsu Kasumi'Oji]

1/1. I'll move this when I get home