Ghost Daimona Death Dealing Power Up

[Ghost Fenyx]

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Achlys Achlys Achlys why do you keep hearing that name? Maybe I should say it one more time. Yeah, I'm not gonna fight you head up I mean why would I? Although I could and with great power too.
Let's cross our blades and see who will come out on top. But that's not my thing you understand.

I am not about to cross blades with a person who has a blade as well. I get inside and get all comfortable with going back and forth and then bam. You say some type of command and now you have an instant upgrade. Now you have some type of weird weapon and power that comes with it. Catch me later with that one.

But I will indeed go arrow for arrow with you. No, really I would go blow for blow. But the thing is I will get back up or at least that's the plan. You see my gift doesn't come from direct battle. But instead, I prefer a better approach one where you will never see it coming maybe feel it. But you will never see it, you Baka.

Achlys Achlys Achlys... Still don't know that name do you? It's the power his MAJESTY has given me. You see all things are made up of Reishi and we Quincy rely on it heavy as do all life. It's like a network of souls but what happens when that network gets a virus? A virus that can't be cured. Think about Achlys Achlys Achlys.

Those who make contact with my Reishi will fall under the effect of my Achlys Achlys
Achlys . The crazy thing is even if one were to deflect my reishi with their prowess such as a zanpaktou etc. Their reishi still made contact with mines.
Now you know how if a Hollow touches a Quincy they are on a time limit until death comes for them.

Yeah, that's the same thing that's happening here.
You will indeed need someone to purify your Reishi and people that take time. I fight like I act and that's a cat-and-mouse game. I pick my battle wisely like a fire can't beat the water so why bring fire to a water fight? You see I will run away from a fight after a while more or less it's a trick. Hopefully, your pride gets the best of you and you start to chase me you silly silly cat.

Well, then I hope you have been paying attention to the area. Because my poison comes in all shapes and forms. My favorite of them are the tiny snow-size ones. I mean you gotta breathe sometimes, right? My poison doesn't just poison you but your Resishi and soul. Causing the power you push out to be weaker and causing you to use more Reishi.

Now that we played the long game and you clearly lost.
I could just end you here but I prefer to let my prey suffer you know it's more dramatic.
However, if I feel you are a threat to his MAJESTY yes I will end you with Achlys Achlys Achlys aka the DEATH DEALER.

New Powers: Bow Properties 

What kind of update: Power Up(Bow Release)

Bow Release Overall Theme Achlys
Ghost Bow's release theme falls under the order of Substance control. Which allows him to give out the exact Lethal Dose to nearly kill anyone. His Reishi comes into contact with. This is done by shooting his arrows at people. Or even more so causing the Reishi itself to to make contact with his target. From that moment on he can activate this deadly effect. Even causing Reishi to be deadly to its user. Rather than be their blood air or even Reishi. Although the ability leaves him lacking in more places than one. This deadly skill is more of a gotcha ability. As the opponent will not see it coming. The only true way to defeat this skill is by having resistance to its highest peak.

So to clear things up. This ability allows the user to poison his targets. Allow him to cause anything including Reishi of the target to become poison. As his Bow turns into a pair of gloves unlike his white ones they become all black with the holy emperor symbol on the back-hand side. This allows him to create liquor base arrows. Mainly Balls, rings, and arrows. More importantly, it can turn into dust. Which is what truly catches its victims off their rockers. 
Ghost very Reishi is the poison itself. What makes it so powerful is. He can make anyone experience what is to happen if a Quincy is touched by a hollow. 

Class 6:Form Property (lit. ‘Achlys)
Cost 100 Reishi to activate 
Upon activating his Bow Release(He must cover his bow in his blood)...Achlys. Ghost Bow will take the form of snow-white gloves. These Gloves differ from the ones he is already wearing. As they now have his majesty's symbol on them. But they are not black but instead are Purple. These Gloves act as his bow and catapult his abilities. The gloves are very unique in their way. The most common sense of this is. It allows Ghost to spread his Reishi out as well. As it becomes part of the bow release itself. 

Basic Arrow Cost-40 Per Arrow-Up to 5 Arrows per post-Speed [800]


Class 4:Power Property-('Daimona')
The main star of the show and the property that will save him. The Power Property allows him to control poison. Rather whatever his Reishi strike he can poison them right then and there. The poison is treated as an advanced version of the Quincy's ill will to fight off a hollow touching them. This means that whoever his poison (Reishi) touches albeit (allies are safe) they will experience the same pain that a Quincy would. This pain lasts for a full 8 post until that person falls unconscious to this event. 

Getting hit 1 time with the dose of poison. Will stunned the target  Reishi. Causing them to have to use twice the reishi to use any reishi-based attacks. 

Being exposed to the poison for 3 posts will Cause the target to move at 50% speed and dish out 50% of their full strength. 

Getting hit with 3 poison-based arrows or even being exposed to the poison for 5 of the user posts. This will trigger his Death Dealer effect. This means the target's very Reishi will become poison. As their bodies will start to shut down for the next three posts. 

After 8 posts the Death Dealer effect will be fully unleashed causing the target to fall victim to its effect. 

The only downside to the Death Dealer is. If the target has resistance to his poison effect they can prolong the speed of the poison causing a longer post count. 


Class 5:Fire Property-(lit. 'Achlys’)
Cost 150 Reishi to activate
It allows Ghost to fire off arrows without using a bow. Which means he can just summon his arrows at will up to one meter away. 

[Ghost Fenyx]

48 hour bump

[Col Arana]

Sorry for the very late grading on this one.

Form property is fine.

Power Property is fine.


Firing Property is not... really a firing property. A firing property is meant to be a property that alters the way your bow fires whether it be some quality of the arrow that adjusts how it can be fired (such as arcing or ricocheting shots for example), or by changing the means that it can be fired in the first place (such as being able to fire arrows from points other than your Bow's form). What you currently have is a mix of Soul Property (the bit about your blood becoming poison) and a Power Property (the ability to mold and reshape your arrows). Arguably even multiple different form properties.

If you can bring the Firing Property more in-line (or you can always change it to be a Form Property if you can't think of a Firing Property) then this should be good to go.

[Ghost Fenyx]

Ok I changed it up

[Ghost Fenyx]

Bump

This should be good to go

[Col Arana]

Just to clarify on this, if you are changing your bow's theme, then you do need to resubmit your full powers. A quick check of Ghosts original application notes your original Bow theme was "Counter"; abilities suited for "Counter" are not necessarily going to suit "Substance control".

I recognize in Discord I mentioned that we could skip over pre-existing properties for purposes of a CiU, but admittedly it had been some time and I had forgotten you were completely revamping the entire theme of your abilities. If Ghost is indeed completely reinventing his release, then we will need up to his Class 4 property (that is to say, his Class 6, 5 and 4 properties).

You have the Form property, no issues there (I will note your comment on the ability about "spreading out his reishi" will have to be either cinematic or hard mechanics for how that is needs to be established if you want it to make a mechanical impact in battles), and the Class 4 Power Property (will get to that in a minute). We are still missing his Class 5 property, and in this case, looking at your app, Ghost didn't even have a Class 5 property to begin with-- so that one's my bad.

So unfortunately, rolling back to our conversation in Discord, I am going to have to take my original stance; Ghost DOES need either a Class 5 Form or a Class 5 Firing property for this CiU to be passed.

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As far as your Power Property, the only major fix is I'd remove comments about your Heart property there. Save that for your actual Heart property when you write it up.

[Ghost Fenyx]

Bump

It is ready for a full review and that what I am doing I am redoing the power up

[Col Arana]

Alright then. For Firing Property that's a bit heavy and arguably overloaded. We've had a similar Firing property in the past in one of Kyo's characters, Giles, but that was a much shorter range and did not include a speed increase. 1200 speed is insane, especially if used with the shortbow.

If you want to be able to fire your arrows without your bow, I would massively restrict the range, I would argue to around 2-3 feet from him at most. While it is possible you could get a Firing property that allowed you to generate your arrows at such an extensive range, it would have to be a much higher Class property.

[Ghost Fenyx]

Ok That is fixed what's next

Bump

[Col Arana]

Range of Firing Property is fine now; Though I would remove the increased firing speed. Increased firing speed would be a unique property all of its own, not an add-on to what is already a very powerful firing property.

[Ghost Fenyx]

Alright I removed it and it should be good to go.

Bump

[Lucien Dantes]

On my Lucien account, but anyways.

1/2

[Leonie Dallmann]

Gonna ask you change your property names, given they're a rip from Leonie's own. Other than that, this is mechanically all right, so I'm glad to give this an O.K. once that's done!

[Ghost Fenyx]

Changed it to Daimona

Bump

[Sieglinde P. Krantz]

2/2!