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Post by Yuki & Yui Tsumugi on Jun 29, 2023 12:48:46 GMT -5
Technique Name: Hadō #3: Shimo Yari
Technique Class: 7 - 10 TTP.
Technique Type: Kidō - Hadō.
Usable By: Kidō-utilizing races.
Technique Element: Ice.
Technique Cost: 25 Reiatsu.
Description: The user fires a foot-long, half-inch thick bolt of frost toward the target. The bolt will embed itself in the target on a hit, causing general numbness and pain. At Mastered, the user can spend an extra 10 reiatsu to make this bolt explode, sending shrapnel of ice everywhere in a ten-foot radius at 50% of the user’s OS, after incantation.
How to Use: Point a hand (or weapon) to the target, speak the incantation, and fire the spell.
Drawbacks: Reiatsu cost.
Incantation: "Chill from the north rolls in with force; display your might and strike down the unprepared with frost!" When the incantation is spoken, the Reiatsu Strength used to determine the power of Shimo Yari is increased by 10%. (i.e. 100 Reiatsu Strength is treated as 110.)
Post by Ludwig Verrlicht on Jun 29, 2023 15:56:21 GMT -5
So I'll be tackling this grading.
Firstly I want a general size of the bolt since it embeds itself into another. Mainly because I kind of imagine that it pierces someone and then "expands" itself to coat the nearby area in frost. If that's not the case and it's just a spike basically then that's fine but I'd still like a size reference.
So, the only thing I really want to change is the cost of the explosive attack. . . Unless you make it a percentage of your OS. Like say 50% since it's a bunch of shards flying out. Mind you. . . the cost for the attack would be 25 reiatsu. So, pick your poison on that one.
Aside from that, I'm good with this. It's a nice low-level spell that I'm kinda surprised took this long to make lol.
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