Post by Zeich Yajuu on Dec 4, 2016 21:22:09 GMT -5
Alright, this one looks fairly straightforward to review.
Devotion - I'd like it to more specifically state that any marks and such disappear as well, not just the effects. I know that this is likely what you are intending, but I'd rather it be directly stated rather than leaving a loophole for turning back on a property and immediately re-establishing the link. Just a clarification, if you would.
Lover's Hand - This is just a tad too powerful, I think. You literally have absolute control as long as you have higher RS, compared against only RS. This means that against SpPr or physical builds, you're nigh unbeatable. To alter this, I'd like to make a few small suggestions. The first will be that it's RS compared against dominant stat instead of just RS; for example, a physical build could concentrate on flexing their muscles or making their heart pump more strongly to force the blood to flow properly, while a spiritual build should resist much like a RS build. I would like an applicable skill to work as well; I think Strength of Will at a 2 should reduce requirements, and 3 should lower them further, but not negate. Something like a 2 requires only 90% of Alicia's RS to resist, while a 3 requires only 75%.
Edit: Oi vei, Kyo! Stop hoppin' in when I'm trying to catch up on the queue. D:
Devotion - I'd like it to more specifically state that any marks and such disappear as well, not just the effects. I know that this is likely what you are intending, but I'd rather it be directly stated rather than leaving a loophole for turning back on a property and immediately re-establishing the link. Just a clarification, if you would.
Lover's Hand - This is just a tad too powerful, I think. You literally have absolute control as long as you have higher RS, compared against only RS. This means that against SpPr or physical builds, you're nigh unbeatable. To alter this, I'd like to make a few small suggestions. The first will be that it's RS compared against dominant stat instead of just RS; for example, a physical build could concentrate on flexing their muscles or making their heart pump more strongly to force the blood to flow properly, while a spiritual build should resist much like a RS build. I would like an applicable skill to work as well; I think Strength of Will at a 2 should reduce requirements, and 3 should lower them further, but not negate. Something like a 2 requires only 90% of Alicia's RS to resist, while a 3 requires only 75%.
Edit: Oi vei, Kyo! Stop hoppin' in when I'm trying to catch up on the queue. D:
SoW 3 on an equal or higher Class should still be 75%. Other than that, you're good.