Grading my Character Bio

[thegreatdeciever]

I Created a Bio about two days ago for a SternRitter position, still currently waiting on it to be Graded so I can get started if anyone can help me out. Also it's been a while since i've been apart of a RPG so my skills in making a Bio are a bit Rusty.

[Deleted]

Hi there, I'm not a mod however you really, really, really, really need to look at the rules and the template requirements, because as it stands nothing in your app is at the minimum standards for a class eight character, much less a Captain supervisor Ritter. This site is for intermediate-advance rpers, so the admin and the mods expect a decent amount of work put into apps. If you want to know what I am talking about go look at the accepted quincy apps we have. Asmo, who was a class eight character upon creation is a prime example of the min requirements of a basic app. Vannan Harper, is essentially the prime example at what a good class 5 app looks like. Both Nero and Jyuria are a good starting point as to what your app should look like given that they are high in class and both ritters.

[Deleted]

I'll just go ahead and leave these here..

Vannan

Asmokon

And this..

[Zeich Yajuu]

I will give it a preliminary grading shortly. In the future, please use the report feature (as though you were reporting an inappropriate post) with the reason of "grading" so that it will pop up in the admin box for us to see and know that it needs to be graded. I apologize for the delay, but understand that not everything is graded within a day or two, especially with most of our staff busy and myself only just being re-promoted to pick up some of the slack.