Post by holika on Oct 31, 2023 19:58:17 GMT -5
Character Name: Holika
New Powers:
Original:
Saisei Oni Overall Ability:
This ability only takes affect when Holika releases into Saisei Oni. Holika’s overall ability centers around the suffering that flame and steel can bring to the body in Tartarus. The agonies and screams that come from such tortures excite her and bring the blood rushing throughout her body. This is shown through her wings of black steel, lighting up on the edges with almost pure white flames burning along them. The heat wafting off of these feathers reaches upwards of 2,500 Kelvin, easily enough to melt through most metals and rock.
Holika’s skin also mimics this theme, as it grows darker and begins cracking, showing a glowing red and orange beneath, dark and pulsating in the cracks of her skin. Her skin mimics the rock basalt where it is not cracked, a dark black with speckles of a light grey almost white smattering about her body. Her own fire and heat cannot harm her however fire coming from another source is another story. She also exudes an aura of hellfire from the cracks within her skin, decimating most low level beings that approach her.
The aura reaches outwards by ten feet and scorches the soul. Those that remain within the aura for more than a single post will feel their skin begin to blister. Remaining within this aura for more than two posts will cause such blisters to begin to burst and begin pouring out a black ichor that has the smell of sulfur. Remaining for even one more post will cause the ichor to burst into hell fire, threatening to consume the being. The flames take on the color of black at its center and bleed outwards reaching an ultra violet purple. Once the ichor bursts and the hellfire is fed the target will suffer double damage from OS attacks. This effect takes up one of her Long-Term stat boosts upon usage.
Those with a superior OS to Holika’s highest Spiritual Stat are able to resist these flames. Those with more than 2 in Strength of Will, Heat Tolerance, or Pain Tolerance can resist all of these pains and continue fighting, ignoring all pain. Those at 2 in Strength of Will or Pain Tolerance will become nearly crippled once the black Hellfire emerges from their body. Finally at a Strength of Will or Pain Tolerance at level 1, the blistering of the skin will cause them to recoil in pain as if one touched hot super heated metal, like the red glow of a stove top, across their entire body. Characters without either of these skills recoil immediately from Holika’s intense heat, not able to enter within ten feet of her body for more than a single second.
Revision:
Saisei Oni Overall Ability:
This ability only takes affect when Holika releases into Saisei Oni. Holika’s overall ability centers around the suffering that flame and steel can bring to the body in Tartarus. The agonies and screams that come from such tortures excite her and bring the blood rushing throughout her body. This is shown through her wings of black steel, lighting up on the edges with almost pure white flames burning along them. The heat wafting off of these feathers reaches upwards of 2,500 Kelvin, easily enough to melt through most metals and rock.
Holika’s skin also mimics this theme, as it grows darker and begins cracking, showing a glowing red and orange beneath, dark and pulsating in the cracks of her skin. Her skin mimics the rock basalt where it is not cracked, a dark black with speckles of a light grey almost white smattering about her body. Her own fire and heat cannot harm her however fire coming from another source is another story. She also exudes an aura of hellfire from the cracks within her skin, decimating most low level beings that approach her.
The aura reaches outwards by ten feet and scorches the soul. Those that enter the aura will immediately feel their skin begin to blister. If they remain in the aura for more than an entire post, the blisters will fully develop. Remaining within this aura for more than a post or reenter the aura will cause such blisters to begin to burst and begin pouring out a black ichor that has the smell of sulfur. Remaining for even one more post will cause the ichor to burst into hell fire, threatening to consume the being. The flames take on the color of black at its center and bleed outwards reaching an ultra violet purple. Once the ichor bursts and the hellfire is fed the target will suffer double damage from OS attacks. This blistering and the black ichor are not actual physical damage but instead the damage to one's soul. As such, you cannot physically heal from such damage and when attempting to touch the black ichor physical objects and body parts will not interact with it.
Those with a superior OS to Holika’s highest Spiritual Stat are able to resist these flames. Those with more than 2 in Strength of Will, Heat Tolerance, or Pain Tolerance can resist all of these pains and continue fighting, ignoring all pain. Those at 2 in Strength of Will or Pain Tolerance will become nearly crippled once the black Hellfire emerges from their body. Finally at a Strength of Will or Pain Tolerance at level 1, the blistering of the skin will cause them to recoil in pain as if one touched hot super heated metal, like the red glow of a stove top, across their entire body. Characters without either of these skills recoil immediately from Holika’s intense heat, not able to enter within ten feet of her body for more than a single second.
Original:
Technique Name: Flocking Flares
Technique Type: [Body]
Usable By (Technique is available to which races?): Hell
Technique Element: Fire
Technique Description and Effects:
Holika’s wings of metal, burning red hot, can detach individual feathers, and launch them at targets with a single flap of her wings. These metallic feathers fly through the air at 800 speed, still engulfed in the flames that they had when attached to her body. When the feathers collide with an object or person they explode with fire, immolating the target with red hot flames and metallic shrapnel at Trecera level.
At Cuartra level, these metallic feathers burst with purple hellfire, traveling at 1000 speed towards their designated target. When these feathers collide with a person or object , they explode with hellfire and consume the target with said hellfire. The hellfire as it connects with the target, if it has flesh, will experience the blistering of their skin if it does not douse the flames with a reiatsu based water ability. In the second post after being set aflame with hellfire, the target will experience blisters. On the third post these blisters will burst open and black ichor will spill from their blisters, feeding the flames of hellfire. The resulting burning by hellfire activates Holika's overall ability on the targets body with all included effects.
If the target already has blisters caused from earlier attacks of hellfire, the blisters will burst open and feed the hellfire with the black ichor that issues forth. The area around the impact can also be set aflame by the explosion in a five foot radius. While Holika fires flares she may still fly with her wings, however how many flares she fires determines how fast she may fly after until they have respawned. 1-4 flares having been fired has no effect on her speed of flying. 5-10 slows her speed by 25%. 10-12 slows her speed by 50%. 13-17 her speed by 75%. 18-20 flares having been fired nulls her flying speed, but she may still hover. Any more and she cannot fly or hover, falling to the ground below and remaining flightless until they respawn.
Flares respawn at a rate of 2 per post unless stunted by firing more flares which will reset the respawn clock. Holika may not respawn a flare while firing a new set of flares from her wings. The damage of Holika's flares is based off of her highest Spiritual stat cut into a quarter per flare.
How to use technique:
Holika focuses on the target and flaps her wing, intentionally dislodging the metallic feathers from their placement and launching them at her desired target.
Technique Drawbacks:
Holika can only launch three feathers at a time at the Trecera level and five at the Cuartra level forms. The reiatsu cost of this attacks is 50 per metallic feather.
Revision:
Technique Name: Flocking Flares
Technique Type: [Body]
Usable By (Technique is available to which races?): Hell
Technique Element: Fire
Technique Description and Effects:
Holika’s wings of metal, burning red hot, can detach individual feathers, and launch them at targets with a single flap of her wings. These metallic feathers fly through the air at 800 speed, still engulfed in the flames that they had when attached to her body. When the feathers collide with an object or person they explode with fire, immolating the target with red hot flames and metallic shrapnel at Trecera level. The detonation radius for this form for the flocking flare is ten feet.
At Cuartra level, these metallic feathers burst with purple hellfire, traveling at 1000 speed towards their designated target. When these feathers collide with a person or object , they explode with hellfire and consume the target with said hellfire. The hellfire as it connects with the target, if it has flesh, will experience the blistering of their skin if it does not douse the flames with a reiatsu based water ability. In the second post after being set aflame with hellfire, the target will experience blisters. On the third post these blisters will burst open and black ichor will spill from their blisters, feeding the flames of hellfire. The resulting burning by hellfire activates Holika's overall ability on the targets body with all included effects. The detonation radius in this form for the flocking flare is twenty feet.
If the target already has blisters caused from earlier attacks of hellfire, the blisters will burst open and feed the hellfire with the black ichor that issues forth. The area around the impact can also be set aflame by the explosion in a five foot radius. While Holika fires flares she may still fly with her wings, however how many flares she fires determines how fast she may fly after until they have respawned. 1-4 flares having been fired has no effect on her speed of flying. 5-10 slows her speed by 25%. 10-12 slows her speed by 50%. 13-17 her speed by 75%. 18-20 flares having been fired nulls her flying speed, but she may still hover. Any more and she cannot fly or hover, falling to the ground below and remaining flightless until they respawn.
Flares respawn at a rate of 2 per post unless stunted by firing more flares which will reset the respawn clock. Holika may not respawn a flare while firing a new set of flares from her wings. The damage of Holika's flares is based off of her highest Spiritual stat per flare.
How to use technique:
Holika focuses on the target and flaps her wing, intentionally dislodging the metallic feathers from their placement and launching them at her desired target.
Technique Drawbacks:
Holika can only launch three feathers at a time at the Trecera level and five at the Cuartra level forms. The reiatsu cost of this attacks is 50 per metallic feather.
What kind of update: Power Update
Current Rank: Legatus Custos
Thread Justification For Rank Change: -
rpforumbleach.proboards.com/thread/11779/warden-wages-war?page=1&scrollTo=78275 - A loss to someone of equal or higher stature, Kitai. I would probably say higher.
rpforumbleach.proboards.com/thread/13056/kick-back-dp-pvp?page=2&scrollTo=90569 - A loss to someone of lower stature but amazing power.
After the fight with Hiyori, I see an apparent weakness in the abilities that Holika suffers from that seems to be more crippling than fair, in my opinion. I would also say that in character, Holika would look at this defeat and begin to change as a character in order to better anticipate her foes and strike them down. This was Holika's second fight and her first proposed change in CIU fashion. Both fights were losses and I see this as two crippling issues with the character's abilities.
New Powers:
Original:
Saisei Oni Overall Ability:
This ability only takes affect when Holika releases into Saisei Oni. Holika’s overall ability centers around the suffering that flame and steel can bring to the body in Tartarus. The agonies and screams that come from such tortures excite her and bring the blood rushing throughout her body. This is shown through her wings of black steel, lighting up on the edges with almost pure white flames burning along them. The heat wafting off of these feathers reaches upwards of 2,500 Kelvin, easily enough to melt through most metals and rock.
Holika’s skin also mimics this theme, as it grows darker and begins cracking, showing a glowing red and orange beneath, dark and pulsating in the cracks of her skin. Her skin mimics the rock basalt where it is not cracked, a dark black with speckles of a light grey almost white smattering about her body. Her own fire and heat cannot harm her however fire coming from another source is another story. She also exudes an aura of hellfire from the cracks within her skin, decimating most low level beings that approach her.
The aura reaches outwards by ten feet and scorches the soul. Those that remain within the aura for more than a single post will feel their skin begin to blister. Remaining within this aura for more than two posts will cause such blisters to begin to burst and begin pouring out a black ichor that has the smell of sulfur. Remaining for even one more post will cause the ichor to burst into hell fire, threatening to consume the being. The flames take on the color of black at its center and bleed outwards reaching an ultra violet purple. Once the ichor bursts and the hellfire is fed the target will suffer double damage from OS attacks. This effect takes up one of her Long-Term stat boosts upon usage.
Those with a superior OS to Holika’s highest Spiritual Stat are able to resist these flames. Those with more than 2 in Strength of Will, Heat Tolerance, or Pain Tolerance can resist all of these pains and continue fighting, ignoring all pain. Those at 2 in Strength of Will or Pain Tolerance will become nearly crippled once the black Hellfire emerges from their body. Finally at a Strength of Will or Pain Tolerance at level 1, the blistering of the skin will cause them to recoil in pain as if one touched hot super heated metal, like the red glow of a stove top, across their entire body. Characters without either of these skills recoil immediately from Holika’s intense heat, not able to enter within ten feet of her body for more than a single second.
Revision:
Saisei Oni Overall Ability:
This ability only takes affect when Holika releases into Saisei Oni. Holika’s overall ability centers around the suffering that flame and steel can bring to the body in Tartarus. The agonies and screams that come from such tortures excite her and bring the blood rushing throughout her body. This is shown through her wings of black steel, lighting up on the edges with almost pure white flames burning along them. The heat wafting off of these feathers reaches upwards of 2,500 Kelvin, easily enough to melt through most metals and rock.
Holika’s skin also mimics this theme, as it grows darker and begins cracking, showing a glowing red and orange beneath, dark and pulsating in the cracks of her skin. Her skin mimics the rock basalt where it is not cracked, a dark black with speckles of a light grey almost white smattering about her body. Her own fire and heat cannot harm her however fire coming from another source is another story. She also exudes an aura of hellfire from the cracks within her skin, decimating most low level beings that approach her.
The aura reaches outwards by ten feet and scorches the soul. Those that enter the aura will immediately feel their skin begin to blister. If they remain in the aura for more than an entire post, the blisters will fully develop. Remaining within this aura for more than a post or reenter the aura will cause such blisters to begin to burst and begin pouring out a black ichor that has the smell of sulfur. Remaining for even one more post will cause the ichor to burst into hell fire, threatening to consume the being. The flames take on the color of black at its center and bleed outwards reaching an ultra violet purple. Once the ichor bursts and the hellfire is fed the target will suffer double damage from OS attacks. This blistering and the black ichor are not actual physical damage but instead the damage to one's soul. As such, you cannot physically heal from such damage and when attempting to touch the black ichor physical objects and body parts will not interact with it.
Those with a superior OS to Holika’s highest Spiritual Stat are able to resist these flames. Those with more than 2 in Strength of Will, Heat Tolerance, or Pain Tolerance can resist all of these pains and continue fighting, ignoring all pain. Those at 2 in Strength of Will or Pain Tolerance will become nearly crippled once the black Hellfire emerges from their body. Finally at a Strength of Will or Pain Tolerance at level 1, the blistering of the skin will cause them to recoil in pain as if one touched hot super heated metal, like the red glow of a stove top, across their entire body. Characters without either of these skills recoil immediately from Holika’s intense heat, not able to enter within ten feet of her body for more than a single second.
Original:
Technique Name: Flocking Flares
Technique Type: [Body]
Usable By (Technique is available to which races?): Hell
Technique Element: Fire
Technique Description and Effects:
Holika’s wings of metal, burning red hot, can detach individual feathers, and launch them at targets with a single flap of her wings. These metallic feathers fly through the air at 800 speed, still engulfed in the flames that they had when attached to her body. When the feathers collide with an object or person they explode with fire, immolating the target with red hot flames and metallic shrapnel at Trecera level.
At Cuartra level, these metallic feathers burst with purple hellfire, traveling at 1000 speed towards their designated target. When these feathers collide with a person or object , they explode with hellfire and consume the target with said hellfire. The hellfire as it connects with the target, if it has flesh, will experience the blistering of their skin if it does not douse the flames with a reiatsu based water ability. In the second post after being set aflame with hellfire, the target will experience blisters. On the third post these blisters will burst open and black ichor will spill from their blisters, feeding the flames of hellfire. The resulting burning by hellfire activates Holika's overall ability on the targets body with all included effects.
If the target already has blisters caused from earlier attacks of hellfire, the blisters will burst open and feed the hellfire with the black ichor that issues forth. The area around the impact can also be set aflame by the explosion in a five foot radius. While Holika fires flares she may still fly with her wings, however how many flares she fires determines how fast she may fly after until they have respawned. 1-4 flares having been fired has no effect on her speed of flying. 5-10 slows her speed by 25%. 10-12 slows her speed by 50%. 13-17 her speed by 75%. 18-20 flares having been fired nulls her flying speed, but she may still hover. Any more and she cannot fly or hover, falling to the ground below and remaining flightless until they respawn.
Flares respawn at a rate of 2 per post unless stunted by firing more flares which will reset the respawn clock. Holika may not respawn a flare while firing a new set of flares from her wings. The damage of Holika's flares is based off of her highest Spiritual stat cut into a quarter per flare.
How to use technique:
Holika focuses on the target and flaps her wing, intentionally dislodging the metallic feathers from their placement and launching them at her desired target.
Technique Drawbacks:
Holika can only launch three feathers at a time at the Trecera level and five at the Cuartra level forms. The reiatsu cost of this attacks is 50 per metallic feather.
Revision:
Technique Name: Flocking Flares
Technique Type: [Body]
Usable By (Technique is available to which races?): Hell
Technique Element: Fire
Technique Description and Effects:
Holika’s wings of metal, burning red hot, can detach individual feathers, and launch them at targets with a single flap of her wings. These metallic feathers fly through the air at 800 speed, still engulfed in the flames that they had when attached to her body. When the feathers collide with an object or person they explode with fire, immolating the target with red hot flames and metallic shrapnel at Trecera level. The detonation radius for this form for the flocking flare is ten feet.
At Cuartra level, these metallic feathers burst with purple hellfire, traveling at 1000 speed towards their designated target. When these feathers collide with a person or object , they explode with hellfire and consume the target with said hellfire. The hellfire as it connects with the target, if it has flesh, will experience the blistering of their skin if it does not douse the flames with a reiatsu based water ability. In the second post after being set aflame with hellfire, the target will experience blisters. On the third post these blisters will burst open and black ichor will spill from their blisters, feeding the flames of hellfire. The resulting burning by hellfire activates Holika's overall ability on the targets body with all included effects. The detonation radius in this form for the flocking flare is twenty feet.
If the target already has blisters caused from earlier attacks of hellfire, the blisters will burst open and feed the hellfire with the black ichor that issues forth. The area around the impact can also be set aflame by the explosion in a five foot radius. While Holika fires flares she may still fly with her wings, however how many flares she fires determines how fast she may fly after until they have respawned. 1-4 flares having been fired has no effect on her speed of flying. 5-10 slows her speed by 25%. 10-12 slows her speed by 50%. 13-17 her speed by 75%. 18-20 flares having been fired nulls her flying speed, but she may still hover. Any more and she cannot fly or hover, falling to the ground below and remaining flightless until they respawn.
Flares respawn at a rate of 2 per post unless stunted by firing more flares which will reset the respawn clock. Holika may not respawn a flare while firing a new set of flares from her wings. The damage of Holika's flares is based off of her highest Spiritual stat per flare.
How to use technique:
Holika focuses on the target and flaps her wing, intentionally dislodging the metallic feathers from their placement and launching them at her desired target.
Technique Drawbacks:
Holika can only launch three feathers at a time at the Trecera level and five at the Cuartra level forms. The reiatsu cost of this attacks is 50 per metallic feather.
What kind of update: Power Update
Current Rank: Legatus Custos
Thread Justification For Rank Change: -
rpforumbleach.proboards.com/thread/11779/warden-wages-war?page=1&scrollTo=78275 - A loss to someone of equal or higher stature, Kitai. I would probably say higher.
rpforumbleach.proboards.com/thread/13056/kick-back-dp-pvp?page=2&scrollTo=90569 - A loss to someone of lower stature but amazing power.
After the fight with Hiyori, I see an apparent weakness in the abilities that Holika suffers from that seems to be more crippling than fair, in my opinion. I would also say that in character, Holika would look at this defeat and begin to change as a character in order to better anticipate her foes and strike them down. This was Holika's second fight and her first proposed change in CIU fashion. Both fights were losses and I see this as two crippling issues with the character's abilities.
