Slayer of Krug Dug

[Kitai Yoru]

Name: Slayer of Krug Dug
Description: This is a large weapon that looks exactly a wooden club, but is actually made of flesh and bone, and has a wrinkly fleshy feel to it. It is about six feet in length.

Class: 4
Item Type: Weapon
Item Power (IP): 600
Offense Type: Physical
Durability: 3x
Bonuses: This item uses either its IP or the user's strength to deal damage when it impacts something. When this item hits something, the user can pay 100 reiatsu to create a small ogre thing named Krug Dug. If this is against the ground, the one foot tall summon will run towards the wielder's enemy with 250 speed, and attempt to grab onto them with 300 strength, hugging them, and attempting to crush them. If the ogre is created onto a person, it will hug them to begin with.

Drawbacks: These Krug Dug's only have 200 durability, and only last two posts. Up to three can exist at one time.
Cost: 10,000
Crafting Skills: 4 in Crafting
Donated to Urahara's: Personal Item

[holika]

Hello! This is Yomi coming in to grade your item! This is for my testing as a Grader and I have had the pleasure of reading over this marvelous item. I do however have some qualms as to the item and it's abilities.

1. I believe for this weapon to have both summoning abilities and a shockwave affect as a Class 4 item is a bit too stacked. Shockwaves being a specialization ability in strength and summoning usually reserved to release abilities, it doesn't seem quite fair to have them both placed on one item.

2. Your summonings seem to be rather strong and last for a good long while. Three posts is a lot of time in a fight, especially with a creature that can be spawned onto an opponent already grappling them with 400 Strength. There is also a manner of how many "Krug Dug's" can be spawned into existence at a time. 100 reiatsu cost is fine but I don't think it would be wise to have an item that can spawn the amount that, as an example, Kitai could create. So, I would place a cap on how many Krug Dug's can be spawned, reduce the posts of existence to one or two, and reduce the strength of these Krug Dug's by half. I would also suggest with the last part that if you want the strength to remain the same, cap the amount that can be made to one at a time, however you could possibly have up to five created if you were to reduce the strength.

When these issues are addressed, I look forward to reviewing it again and being able to possibly give you the Yomi Stamp of Approval. Thank you for submitting it for review!

[Kitai Yoru]

Removed the Shockwaves, lowered the Strength, reduced the duration, and limited how many could exist at a time.

[holika]

I am agreeable to the changes that have been made! Thank you for your speedy and compliant changes made. Looking over these changes I find that, in my opinion, this item is comparable and in compliance with the site's regulations! Yomi's stamp of approval incoming!

1/2

[Jeff Franklin]

Seeing how most of my concerns were dealt with by Yomi, I like how this item looks! Here's my 2/2!