Komar

[Deleted]

Sorry for the wait, but let's go ahead and get this grading started. Well, partly. There's a couple of things you'll need to touch up before we can look over your powers. Physical Description requires a minimum of two paragraphs to be passable, what you have is broken up and wouldn't count as one paragraph. Please fix the formatting. Your Likes and Dislikes and all those other sections need short descriptions. Please fill those out. Please fix the formatting in your Overall Personality. Fighting Style has a minimum requirement of three paragraphs. Fix the formatting of your History. Once you've done all that we can go over your powers.

[Future Cult Leader]

I did that and I think it should be good now.

I will be honest and say that this is my first time designing the characte and I hardly put any thought into this character's history (which is kinda obvious), instead trying to focus on personality and creating a history with it. 

Though as I said, I did what you asked me to do and I hope it's all ok now.

[Deleted]

Apologies for the wait, I've had a busy weekend. Packing for a trip, dog sitting, chores, etc. Anyways.

When I said "Your Likes and Dislikes and all those other sections need short descriptions. Please fill those out." I quite literally meant your Flaws, Fears and Goals. I didn't feel I needed to explicitly specify that, but it seems I did. The formatting of your Overall Personality is still fucked. Please fix it. I'll review your power now.

Power is...fine? I think? It's a bit confusing, seeing how it seems to have no offensive potential but it's fine. Fix everything else and I'll give you my 1/2.

[Future Cult Leader]

I added a description, I tried to fix my paragraphs in overall personality, but I am no writer so I don't know how to unfuck a fucked paragraph.

[Deleted]

1/2

[Shizuka Sanamizu ✮]

Yo! I'll go ahead and knock the second grading out.



In order to reach the minimum length for Overall Personality, you need to add one more paragraph.


You need to add five more paragraphs to your character's History to reach the minimum length on that, as well.


Also saying "okay" to your powers, but they're confusing. We'll have to see how they're used in combat sense and address issues later.



Let me know once you've made these changes!

[Future Cult Leader]

In all honesty I don't think I wanna play this game anymore.

At first I was hyped and excited for it but after over a week of character creation that was summarized with "Write down more" or "Change the formatting" I can't really see the fun part anymore.
Feels less like fun and more like a chore at this point.

If everything on this forum is basically "write a lot, wait even more" then I think I might be bailing out, at least with this character.
I dunno, it just not seem fun anymore at this point, which is really a shame, though I might be overreacting, but how can I have any hype left after 8 days of making a character?