Kido Dragon

[Impossible]

Technique Name: [Dragon]

Class: [3]

Technique Type: [Construct]

Usable By: [Human world dweller]

Technique Element: [Various]

Technique Description and Effects: [This ability is not a stand alone technique. This ability takes any other ability and changes it. At class three, this ability takes any technique and turns it into one of two dragons. The first dragon option is the serpentine dragon of the East. The Asian dragon, extremely prominent in mythology and even certain parts of history. This dragon is twenty feet long, and comes with or without wings. The next dragon is the feared dragon of the West, most known for terrorizing the masses, and being slain by the knight. This dragon is twenty feet tall, and has one head.

Each dragon is comprised of whatever technique was used in conjunction with. The dragons are able to think and act independently, slaying anything in their path save for their master. The dragons will follow simple orders that their masters give out, but they will do said orders in their own manner. Each dragon is able to breath flames, carrying the same effects and combat stat as the ability that the dragon is formed from. If the dragon is slain, by any attack equal to or over 3/4 the rs of the original technique, will explode equal to its rs into the sky destroying everything above it in a violent pillar of reiatsu. The dragon's strength is 800, with 600 being the speed for the Western dragon, with the opposite being true for the Eastern dragon.

At proficient, the caster can create two Eastern dragons, each twenty five feet long, or a Western dragon standing thirty feet tall with two heads.

At mastered, the caster is able to create three Eastern dragons, each thirty feet long, or a Western dragon standing forty feet tall with three heads.

Each dragon is the same class as the ability used to make it, and are subject to regular clash rulings.]

How to use technique: [You pay 500 reiatsu on your non-release technique, and the ability takes form. The ability, if used that post, lasts a little longer than it should, right before the beast forms. The dragon lasts 5 posts longer than the technique used to make it would normally last.]

Technique Drawbacks (Limitations, repercussions for use, etc) [Cost]

Made By: [Impossible]

Reserved?: [No]

[Kyomei Kuchiki]

Higher reiatsu cost, lengthen Incantation. Add that the class of the Dragon is equal to the class of the technique used. So you can't take a tiny byakurai and made a massive class three dragon that can breathe lightning and requires a lot of rs to beat. So a class 4+ technique would nearly always beat your byakurai dragon. After those changes are made I will reread it. I'm thinking that the Dragon exploding is a bit much, but I'll see how I feel about it. I'm more willing to be lenient because it is unreserved, of course. An additional balance could require skill in Kidou to learn this technique.

[Impossible]

Change what you asked, switched up the explosion bit, and added a bit the the incantation.

[Kyomei Kuchiki]

Looks perfect for me. 1/2 approved. I can't report things on my phone, so please report this post and I'll clean up the mod queue later.

[Amagai Kuchiki]

Scaling the physical strength and speed of summons off of the summoner's RS is not something that we as mod's are willing to accept. A static speed/strength has to be introduced here. A breath weapon can still use the Summoner's RS, since it's effectively a technique.

Also, duration is needed here.

The Incantation Effect is unclear: does the shockwave only emit once?

[Impossible]

Fixed

[Impossible]

Bump?

[Impossible]

I think I want to change this to reserved

[Impossible]

Bump

[Johnwaluigi]

I don't think the shockwave that accompanies the incantation should last an entire post, it would simply be a blast of energy when the technique is released. Once that change has been made, I'll be happy to give this my 2/2.

[Johnwaluigi]

Unfortunately, Impossible is neither the correct Class, nor does he have enough TTP to learn this technique - so these gradings are considered invalid. Please be sure to have the appropriate TTP next time you ask to have a reserved technique graded.

[Impossible]

Kay, I decided to just make this unreserved, and for hdw. It had a 2/2, so can it be passed?

[☾ Aevus | Umbra ☽]

The only problem was that you were trying to make it reserved without the available TTP. Making it unreserved solves that problem. Since it got 2/2'd, it mechanically has already been approved and the problem has been solved. So I'd say yes as a member and someone who's been doing test grades. Also apologies to any mods grading this. It just looked like a quick question to answer. Seeing how most of you've been busy. I thought someone might as well answer it quickly, since it was a simple question and all.