Jacqueline Maine [TT Fullbringer]

[Jacqueline ACK]

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Type: [Lunatic]

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Rank: [Mercenary - Rank 1]

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-Basic Information-

Name: [Jacqueline Maine]

Full Name: [Jacqueline Aries Cardinal Klein Maine]

Real Age/Age of Appearance: [18/18]

Birthday (Month/Day): [03/12]

Blood Type: [B-]

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-Appearance-

Height/Weight: [5'4"/93 lbs.]

Physical Description:

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Well, let us just state the fact that Jac isn't one who was born of "natural" means. What does that mean? Consider the fact that she aged unnaturally by means that only her mother could explain. More of the sort that had to deal with something closely resembling to that of Satanic rituals. But no not really. Just the use of Quincy abilities in order to help soothe the process along of birth, and aging to the most matured form. That form referred to as a young adult, and pumped full of reiatsu during her time spent in the womb. In that case, any one can say, "What the Hell?" Or like the secondary thought, "Really?" Altogether when putting the facts of her origins into a single bowl, any one can realize that her reason for looking the way that she does is reduced to "Oh, that explains everything."

In many ways Jac resembles much of her mother. For those who have met her mother, then the similarities are quite frightening. A slender physique and a dead pale white for a skin tone. So yeah, it is just as white as the White Desert of Hueco Mundo, should feel right at home with that. Short lengthy curled hair, which is about the length to her collar bone, and white glistening texture of each strand spreads across the region of her scalp to really cover up a lot of her neck and somewhat of her eyes. Yet, there are oddly a few strands of those hairs that are actually brown. Naturally occurring honestly, and spread across the left area of her scalp, which divides the two parts as brown and solid pale white. Although it spread across to cover up much of her face, it doesn't get in the way of her eye sight. 20/20 in all in her point of view. Her hairstyle isn't well kept at all, very much like a child reaching up to adolescence.

Pointed tips and all, her slender eyebrows and eye lashes carry with them the same dead color of white. The only remarkable thing about them is that they draw more attention to the eyes. A different color from the other. A clear sign that says Jac has a complete Heterochromia, one iris color is completely different from the other. One eye carries the trait of her mother, which is a deep blood red. And the other is what many believe to be that of her father, which would have hold a deep brown shade, but is really whitened out to that of a faint tint of brown instead for her left eye. But what makes the eyes a bit more remarkable is the shape of her pupils. A ditzy spiral shape that starts in the middle of the iris then bit by bit extends outwardly.

Small lips and a small nose are all that comfort the fact Jac has small ears too. Almost as if not all of her was fully developed, or most likely rushed while still in the womb. As it was described before, Jac possesses a very slender figure. Like almost no muscle tone to figure out as the girl doesn't seem to work out. That itself is on the surface what the eyes can see. But it is apparent that much of her physical abilities were inherited. Again this strongly insinuates that much of her prowess originates from her parents. Although not confirmed, the girl does have muscle tone, just not toned to match a sculpted body or that built as an athlete. This is also seen when looking at her bust too, which is an easy B-Cup scenario.

A firm abdomen and arms, and scrawny legs, if there was a category in which Jac excels in it would be running. A robust shape for her hips and thighs, pretty much she excels in movement. Not a good brawler or at tactics, the girl is in well enough condition to propel herself quicker than most. What are to be seen as impressive are her calves and feet. These areas of her body are what are more defined in terms of muscle and form. Apart from her body what she chooses to wear puts much of her form together. So, what helps pale white to look good? What other choice than black, since you know, black goes with everything.

Starting off, Jac dons a dirty white long sleeve hoody that seems a bit large for her stature. But in reality, it is a good fit for her as the hoodie itself can cover her entire scalp and forehead. Kinda poofy in the sense that it seems to be made of cotton and wool than just tightened silks or other fabric. Easily adjustable with the strings at the base of the collar, the material that makes up the large cover is obviously old and tattered. Some parts stretched out seemingly that the head opening itself can lazily fall over her shoulder entire if she does tighten it at times. Now, that is merely for the top as she isn't likely gonna be running around in the nude. Not her thing unless it was for entertainment, or just when feels like it. Nope, which is all the more reason why she wears a sort of lingerie beneath her hoodie that doubles for bra and undies too.

Forming a natural clingy collar around her neck, the material runs down her neck and around her chest in a sort of tube top style. Like really, this is skin tight and definitely made of silk to be very soft for her skin. Hey now don't be judging since it was really the only thing that she could steal that she did like. Everything else seemed a bit scanty for her tastes, including since much of her thinking is sometimes that of a child. Any who, after keeping her chest company, the fabric does the same with the neck and runs down yet again to the groin. Now this area will obviously act as underwear for the spot as the material goes over the girl's hips. Therefore, she doesn't really need to worry about what is underneath the single piece sweater since she is indeed covered up too.

Soo, this means that a lot of her abdomen and upper ribs are exposed, and somewhat of her hips when it comes to being that of her undergarments alone. A white tarnished sash is what is seen wrapping around her pelvis, and is what keeps her black wear and tear black pale skirt in place. School related and at the thighs, so it does make them somewhat a mini-skirt. Easy and breezy just like how she likes it. The only thing that makes the skirt unique a bit is the design, which has a thick moss green lining that traces the bottom edges all the way around as a single straight line. Keeping it simple and not very flashy, unlike her mother that is with what she had to experience in her life. However, despite that the taste in clothing are almost similar. This is in regards to holding a chain, which is linked to the collar area of the girl's shirt. Including, Jac does wear sleeves that resemble that of an asylum straight jacket, capable of connecting to the opening of the other sleeve and tying them shut/together.

As for foot wear, Jac doesn't put on any Nikes or some good brand to help keep her suited for running. It is what it is, and the Fullbringer travels light, to some degree. Slip on slippers. The best things that any one can ask for. Slightly modified to stick to her feet, they are comfortable to run in, and match the soles of her feet quite nicely, so no athletes foot. Yet, the most interesting thing about her whole attire is what she wears around her mouth. Sorta like a mouth guard, and as a somewhat filter, like what sneezing masks are, it is an actual mask itself. Originally part of an old trendy paintball mask, Jac attached a layer of black cloth along the interior to serve a similar purpose as a sneezing mask. Overall, it is a hard plastic mask that wraps around her mouth and jaw line, along with the entirety of her ears. It pretty much loops around and is tied at the base of the back of the neck. The design, however, is completely made by Jac herself, more or less making the exterior of the mask appear to be that of a toothy grin with large etched fangs.

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[Jacqueline ACK]

-Personality-

Dislikes:

*Busy Environments*

All the noise and clutter of other people's crap just annoys her. Maybe it was the fact she gets to see so many sights that she doesn't normally like to begin with. Families, friends, couples, all that get together stuff doesn't seem to get through that head of hers. Solitude is what she is more normally use to. The less means the less she has to deal with. The less she has to deal with the less people who try to get in her way. But for what? That is for her to know and no one to find out. At least not until later anyhow.


*Mornings*

Too damn bright for anyone's own good. Usually a sign for a new beginning, but for Jacky, it is something else. For the Fullbringer, it was a lack of sun shine during her birth that caused this part of her personality to form. Sun light doesn't bother her in the least. Though the early mornings mean that something can happen first thing in the day. New troubles and new issues start which meant there was a large gap until the night. Until she could feel safe again. Plus, she isn't a morning person either. Waking up early is much harder for her to do mentally as it takes some time before she is in her right mind.


*Fish*

The smell is terrible, and it doesn't taste like Chicken. Sometimes Chicken don't even taste like Chicken. Just the heavy scent of the ocean on something edible just makes her want to gag so hard. Not only that, but just touching fish just leaves a weird sensation on her finger tips. Scaly, weird, and ugly. The taste itself is something that isn't normal for her. Light with sometimes a strong, dense flavor, it doesn't matter what variety of fish it is, it isn't something that the girl can handle when it is suppose to be one thing, but then is another.


*Children Screams*

She can't seem to really get a grasp as to why she finds herself disliking the cries of little children. Like, what do they have to cry about when they lose a juice bottle or their favorites toy? It's nothing too bad or dangerous. It wasn't like they were born without knowing their Mom. They were never told as to who were her parents or even considering the fact that she grew up unlike all the other children. Hell, she didn't even have much of a childhood to be honest. Though there was something always there when it came to this subject. Probably it was the fact she was screaming when born. Alone in the darkness with no sign of comfort. Just the feeling of warmth taken away just as she was growing accustomed to it. She doesn't know why.


*Liars*

Possibly the one and only people she despises the most. The number one sort of people on her list that she would want to kill first. Actually, scratch that thought. Before death, she would want them to sing. A sweet sweet lullaby of screams and crying as it all comes tumbling down on their heads. Especially those who hold some amount of political power, or authority over other people. People who are meant to help others instead misuse their position to take advantage of others. Most people are liars just waiting to be caught. Some times they just need a little bit of persuasion to really get them to admit the truth.




Likes:

*Candy*

Gotta say that the girl does have sweet tooth alright. Finding the thrills in trying out new flavors of some her favorites, like Jolly Ranchers, or that of the Peanut Butter cups. Such intense flavors at time that just perk up the senses from their sleepy state, and then the more mellow sort that help to calm and relax the palette. Some may look to be the same though really they each have their own unique differences. Hell, even the bland ones at least make her feel something than what she normally does. Candy IS the best type of therapy that anyone could ever have.


*Killing*

One more dead means one less to worry about in the future. This is how Jacky's world works. She isn't particularly racist to any one being. Hollows, Shinigami, Quincy, Fullbringer, Bounts, none of them are a bit over the other. Well, perhaps the Quincy are bit more on her hit list than anyone else. The others on the another perspective just come when they do. And when they do, she makes for certain that they are kept quiet, permanently. Her mother had the right idea on how to go about it. The world was sick, twisted. It wore a mask that always smiled as it dangles sweet treats to be nibbled on. But once the treat and mask are removed, the ugly only remains. And it must be removed. This is Jacquline's justice.


*Eating*

Well, might as well put it out there. Jacquline is a glutton. No shame in hiding, and no shame in being one. She was once a growing girl, still is, but that is something that she never grew out of. When eating in a crowd, she often hears how the people around her view her. "Where the Hell does she put all of that?" Pft, they just don't know the ecstasy in all of it. Even more when tasting that of the innards of those that are killed. Still fresh is always the best way going about it, especially when there isn't anything left to eat. So there is that too.


*The Night*

It is something that the Sun doesn't provide. A dark veil of shadows, cold, and silence. All things that Jack can really use when prowling around. In the night, there are things that can not be seen. That is how the Fullbringer likes it. It is in the shadows of the night that she can truly feel alive, but at the same time dead. A never ending struggle for balance as one pushes the other, to overcome it all. It is here that Jack can feel secure, safe from all those that will try to find her.


*The Notebook*

Something her mom left behind. Probably originally not meant for her, or anything like a gift, but something that was given to her nonetheless as
a momentum when she couldn't. All she was told about her mother was just the minimal details. Probably trying to protect her or something. Before she left home Jac made sure to take the notebook with her. Inside had details about the Vandenreich, people who met with her mom, and some other gruesome details about those that she dealt with. Entries that told her story, and during the time up to her conception. There were a lot of details, including the names of a few people. Some who may be possibly her father. This notebook is to be deemed a treasure.



Flaws:

*Unstable*

Well that won't take long to figure out. When it comes down to it, Jack is very unstable. This is for both the mental aspect and that of the emotion capacity. Growing as quickly as she did there wasn't much room to really develop, and/or learn what how to handle herself when introduced to a situation. So, this can result in constant mood swings as being somewhat jolly and childish as her default setting. However, that can quickly shift to being completely drastic in terms of aggression, or over the top child when throwing a tantrum. But in all honesty, it is certain that she will not be holding back as she is an open book.


*Unpredictable*

Because of her instability Jacky can be really hard to figure out. Her constant mood swings and antics make it difficult to think what she would do next. Contradictive in almost every way possible, to her it is even a task to really find out what she is going to do. That is why she doesn't necessary think all that often. She mostly relies on her gut instinct than planning ahead. Now this doesn't make her stupid in any sense. After all, even the dopiest of people have some glimmer of sense.


*Agressive*

Let's face it, with much of her inability to form a consensus with many things, Jack is prone to aggression. Always asserting herself toward her own goals, or to which of that she favors most. With an ever changing mind, Jacks' perspective can be altered at any point in time, which can completely disrupt any previous plans or objectives. She does what she believes to be a thrill for her. So this does mean that she won't be holding back or restraining herself at any point in time as it doesn't do her any good in the first place.


*Apathetic*

With one born with nothing she doesn't really cherish nothing. This gives the Fullbringer a perception of holding something dear meaningless. Compassion, and attachments do nothing for her. Friends, family, everyone around her is no more an acquaintance, or just a random nobody. No one gets close, or remotely friendly with her as bonds are just useless piles of garbage to the girl. At least in terms of the mindset. Everything else, like in facial expressions or body language, suggest something else.



Habits:

*LIES*

It is an obvious fact that Jacqueline is a liar. There is no denying that. Deception is another key in surviving out in the streets. Making someone think of an entirely different idea to lead them away from the truth is what helped to keep the Fullbringer alive. The better you are in hiding the facts, the more off balance the others will be. Makes them cautious, a bit nervous. All the more better in providing more breathing room for Jack to play around with. Not only in fighting, but mostly with her attitude. Whether it be with a smile, a slump expression, or just acting as floozy as a prostitute, it is usually how one portrays themselves is how they are first personified as.


*Very Giddy*

Never really being able to live her life out as a child unscrewed a few hinges in Jac. So, for her to really enjoy some of the thrills that life has to offer does make her more excitable. Energetic and just plain happy, Jac tends to over react as some of her mind set is still very much like a little girl. This means that when she does take a fancy to her faves, then pretty much she can take it out of hand.


*The Grin*


Very similar to that of a Hollow's mask, Jac has her own sort of grin. Always displayed for all to see, it serves not only as her ever growing excitement, but doubles as a poker face. On the other side, it can serve as a means of intimidating. Who would like some serial killer walking towards you with a smile? Somewhat kinda creepy. But, most of all, it is a sign of anticipation of what is to come.


*Singing*


Just like her mother, some lullabies help to bring some extra "life" into her world. She heard a few while still in the womb, so it is sort of a habit when trying to recreate them to an extent. However, with some time and practice, she was able to do so. Maybe doing so helps to bring her closer to the mother she never knew? Probably putting herself in her shoes would help to make her see what her mother believed in? Who knows what lurks in her head when she sings, though, it usually comes to a grizzly end when it is used among other people.


*A Glutton*


She eats a lot. And like, a whole lot. Jac doesn't really have opportunities to eat a lot. So, when a chance comes along to gorge herself, then you bet she'll take it.


*Pacing*


Jac is much like her mother in this regard. She simply doesn't like staying in a single place. Perhaps it is because she was moved around a lot in the womb? Maybe around idea is due to wanting to travel around the world? Whatever is going on through her head she just can't stay still.


Fears:

*Captivity*


Being stuck in a single place sucks. Especially when being in that spot keeps her from doing what she wants to do. Stuck in a single place gets no one anywhere. There is no change in life, always stagnant. Jac hates the same old same old trivial nonsense that doesn't alter the world around her, or herself. When there is no change, then there is future. Maybe that was what her mother wanted to do all along.


*Lost Notebook*


Let's face it, it is the only connection that Jac has to her mother. Someone who died to insure that she survived. Although it could have done in a much better way, it still means something to her. That is why the notebook left for her is considered to be Jac's treasure. Something sacred, and must be kept with her at all times. If she lost it, then there wouldn't be anything that will limit her actions. Anger, hate, fear, despair, if not in her confides, then everyone else around her will understand what she feels as well.


*Monsters*


They are pretty scary! Really Really Scary!


*School*


More like a prison than anything else. People who just yell at you for the longest parts of the day, and give you papers that have to be filled out in a certain amount of time. If too stupid, then means more sessions similar to that. It is just a never ending cycle of crap on top of crap that keeps you in a single place. Yeah yeah, it is for the best and for the future. Buuuuuutt, with no one really wanting to know what you know, but what you can do through experience, being out in the world serves one's time even better than schooling does.


Goals:

*Kill the Vandenreich*


They were the source of her mother's sorrows. Her own grandparents put her through a lot of crap, and got what they deserved. But more than that, where her grandparents learned from, that source was where they forced her mother to go through. The harsh reality of it all and still they did it. This can not be forgiven so easily. It is because of them that Jac goes without a mother, and without a family. It is the reason why she is alone in the world of the living. For that reason they will experience the same loneliness that she has felt all this time.


*Names on List*


In the notebook describes a set of particular people who have met her mother. Names that she came across as a point of interest to her as they have either confronted her mother, done something with her, or who were close to her. By some means or by another, they were involved with her. So, this means that one of them can potentially be her father, or those who had reason to kill her. Either friend, foe, or someone who should be by all means erased. Which ever the case may be, she will track them one by one and find her answers.


*Body of Lies*

The world is imperfect. So many people who proclaim to be good and decent. But, all of that is a big fat lie in of itself. There are no good people in the world. None who would help another out of the sake for those people. Always looking to gain something or whatever the case. It was the same case for her Mom, who learned it at an early age. Something that she definitely wanted Jac to learn right away. The world was so corrupt, and full of lies that playing along with it would go no where. They thought that her mother was crazy for knowing the truth of the world. If that was the case, then there was no helping Jac either. In fact, she may be even worse.


*Perfect Assassin*

Not just some ordinary killer is capable of ridding the world of its sinful ways. Being too casual about it leads to making mistakes. And with those mistakes means that there will be an eventual end to her liberating the world of its lies. To rid the mask that is donned, Jac will have to perfect her skills, and sharpen her mind and body. And yeah, be a bit more "crazy" than that of her mother. There was no way the world could remain as such. She can be sloppy with the details, or that of what she does. There can be no errors. For that reason she must be swift, and strike with the precision of a Scapel.



Alignment: [Chaotic Neutral]

Overall Personality:

And they thought her mother was a piece of work, well it is proven that the apple doesn't fall far from the tree in this case. With Jac, there is no remorse, no hesitation, only conviction to carry out what her mother desired; to help rid the world of its mask. So, if that was the case, then that would make her just as crazy as her mother right? Killing those people who only live selfish lives, and lay in wait to hurt others, geez, Jac is more sane than anyone else is in the world. Apathetic to their plights, the girl cares not for those around her aside who seek the truth, honest, and who hold to their honor whilst they live. The details in her mother's notebook hold all of the woman's memories, desires, fears, and hopes. Through her eyes could she see what the world was like. Despite not really having experience none of what her mother had, being told that she died for her, made the Fullbringer want to investigate it all. Though her aging was not as normal as other children, she still developed fine, some parts more than others.

Growing as quickly as did, it helped to move around a bit. Could possibly have been from the cross item that was found with her, but she can digress at times. Any who, quickly coming to a mature age, Jac was capable of moving around to find the answers that she sought out. Hell, made her father figure all the more curious too. All the more reason that the pair went to investigate everything that she wrote down in the notebook. Dark places she found herself in. A burned down asylum, destroyed super markets, and an invisible war that was wagging on for centuries. Each one was connected to her mother as they told segments of the whole story. Within those stories, Jac found what it was that made her mother as such. Looking at how the world worked, she found it disgusting. A corrupt justice system, Humans that hide behind smiles while they steal from those around them. Human greed and lies created the false peace that resided over the world today. Those same lies and selfishness that stole her mother's life, and robbed her of a life spending with a mother.

The only way for her mother to fight back was to go beyond the norm, and inherit the concept that prevented her from being controlled by the world. She had to embrace the insanity that the world rejected. Only then, only then could her mother really be free. Jac felt sad. She felt angry. She wanted them all to pay. And so, she did. That was why she left the Father's house. That was why she started to kill. To punish those who wouldn't be punished. To hurt those who thought they were untouchable. And that was what Jac did. She killed.

That is what makes up Jac's own reasoning in doing what she does. Bit by bit, it became something so natural, so pleasing that she kept on doing it. Just simple anger and hate helped to start it off until it became something more. At first, she felt nothing when she tortured her victims. Letting them scream as she felt they made her mother scream. She took her time, playing with them that is. At least until they stopped altogether. But you know what, making it last made it fun. Jac has no sympathy for those who would do evil, lie, or steal. She is easily vexed by this and has little to no tolerance for it. She is rather impatient in wanting to shut them up, and to do so as painfully as possible. The Fullbringer has no fear in killing, or hurting others. She is as sadistic as her mother, believing that she is in the right, while all others are in the wrong. Proclaiming it as "justice," Jac is definitely naive as she does the same evils onto others, despite having no affiliation with her mother.

Naive, headstrong, and apathetic, all a dangerous combination in having for someone who has a desire to follow in the steps of the Obsessed. Jac is more capable of not feeling emotion, distancing herself quite easily from those who she deems irrelevant. This in fact helps her to carry out the acts necessary to carry out her so called "justice." However, at the same time she does understand that she is not a hero, or anything of the sort. Not completely naive to understand that she does evil as well. She is indeed selfish herself in wanting to fulfill a desire, even more so when torturing people. Obviously, her childish nature is on full display here as she does little to conceal her joy, and playfulness when trying out new techniques in hurting people. Joyful to the point of it being frightening.

Jac is definitely childish, even when not killing. Her mind hasn't fully developed as of yet. So, this means that she can over react like a kid. Like, ewww boogers! This itself does not limit to her speech or way of thinking either, as this does go as far as to her mannerisms too. Innocence painted over by red stains. A child lashing out at a lying world. A crazy combination that makes Jac very unstable in terms of emotionally and mentally. While her mother, Alicia, developed it through experience. So, that makes her decision making quite easy to understand. There are only two ways that she can see a person. Either one, she will end up liking them, and want to instantly hang out. Or two, dislike the person and forcibly make them someone that she distastes right away. So, it is a go, or a no go when it comes to people, or that of an idea.

Jac's form of instability was developed naturally, like a gentle stream turning into a raging river. Gentle yet demanding, as well as understanding yet naive. Curious, open minded, but at the same time narrow minded. Passionate as to what she does, the Fullbringer does pursue her goals with the upmost pleasantry, not seeing them as a job or actual work. Hell, even the aspect of death does little to scare her. In fact, it only serves to excite her. Why is that? She views death as a means to see her mother, and that would bring her such glee.

Confused yet? That is the point since there isn't a point to what she does aside from the obvious reasoning she has for killing. This only makes up who Jac is even more as she can flip out at any time. A secondary part to her insanity as most children are. She is easily capable of changing her mind on a small whim if she does feel like it. This entails that her mind can be difficult to read while at the same time easy. Mixed and matched at times, it will definitely be a doozey in trying to unravel what Jac is all about.

[Jacqueline ACK]

-Powers-

Fighting Style:

Deep down into the shadows of the world does Jac reside and wait for a good opportunity. Despite her up bringing and mental perspective, Jac loves to play. The thrill that it brings as the anticipation grow ever more with each passing second that goes by. Like a roller coaster that always tends to keep the rider in suspense until the ride really starts. The loops and drops are the flavoring of the ride, just like her acting out with attacks. She loves to see what goes on and what it may end up leading to. So, much of the time she drowns herself in the moment and prolongs it entirely. Some would consider it a mistake, but not really. At least for her anyways. All that the Fullbringer wants to do is enjoy herself, as any child would do so when they play games. Afterwards, bring it all to an end.

Though, this game does have some little tricks and conflicts before really coming to a close. So, before any of that closing session stuff happens, how Jac plays is essentially brought down to a single phrase, "Death by a thousand cuts." Jac doesn't really aim for vital spots or important organs. Nope nope. That would make things too quick. There would be no fun in it if her enemies die easily. Actually, this has to do very much with how she kills people all together. You see, when killing she does it slowly. Torture is how it is handled. Moving from the outside, and working her way to the inside. Although it may be meager, ever been sliced along the foot? Pretty painful in fact, and can easily deal a blow to one's own sense of balance. A little information that her Step-Father taught her when raising her.

A decent cut in the webbing between the fingers can hurt like Hell when fingers open up. A cut along side the ribs throbs when stretching out the abs for moving about. Just the little details in where she cuts can help change the tide of playtime. As such, Jac really isn't in any hurry to cut anything important, which does prolong a fight immensely. More often than not, against her favor. Not to say that she doesn't want them to live longer than her, but in cases like these she still has to be delicate. For one, she has to keep herself alive and able to really make those hits make contact. And secondly, she does need to make sure that she stays alive at the same time. Fail in either case and she can be royally screwed. Thankfully, her tactics are usually all over the place. When believing she is caught, specializes in a single area, then pulls a few of those tricks and tools to make her fun all the more fun.

Many of those tricks and methods that Jac can really put to use is that of her poisons. A combination of toxic gases and bodily enhancements help to give her that small edge in a fight. When talking about her use in toxins, they are often displayed in broad uses, meaning like they are just used simply to create opportunities and distractions. There was never really an intention to have them make contact with her foes simply allowing them to be nothing more than facades. Heavy smoke screens with nerve damaging effects can really be a doozy when it takes effect. All the more reason to avoid the coming clouds that she may spew from her mouth, or the surfaces that she ends up tainting with powerful aromas. Of course, these are just some ways that they can be used to make some distance, or cover her own movements. Or even better, to help entrap individuals in a small area with the Fullbringer. Heh.

With such a bad distraction, the game can easily become that of Cat and Mouse, or Keep Away. With all of those keeping peoples minds occupied it becomes simple to vanish into thin air. Stealth is very important for mass murdering those who try and get away from justice. Sliding into the shadows, sometimes literally, helps to do just that. Coming up and around by keeping herself quiet, and out of sight will help for rear attacks. Plus, having a poisonous gas to cover large areas helps to bide some time to help to get around too. But, there is usually a case when that doesn't work and the need comes to really having some long range techniques. Again, poison is the way to go. Pellets, or that of the projectile bombs that can be conjured from inside the body.

But, among her techniques, it is really the augmentations, and enhancements that she does to her own body that help to cross the distance fairly quickly. Much of her power resides in her ability to use her Fullbring, which limits the capabilities in the other areas, like her speed or physical strength. Because of that she tends to focus on her ability to maneuver and move around her opponents quickly enough to put herself into the necessary position to really do some damage. While some of her augmentation techniques help to bolster her lack of capabilites, it is the bodily enhancements that alter her body to better get around tricky situations.

The real game begins when her overall ability turns on. The concept of a blade can be referred to many things, or taken completely literal. This is the reason why many people often confuse it as its ability can range to be very specific, or be very broad. However, all results the same when her grip finds the surface of the skin of her targets; they die. Its danger comes with its versatility and its range, which can catch a lot of people off guard when believing that it is but a single shape. With this in tow, along with her other techniques, mid range to close range are where Jac is most definitely dangerous. Essentially, once close up, her overall ability is overly abused, which if she isn't careful, then the secret behind it is revealed rather quickly, which can suck. It wouldn't be the creme of the crop if found out and can be easily avoided, though still being tough to get around.


Main Fullbring Appearances:

Actually quite simple when it comes to this since there wasn't much to really use in regards of personal possessions. Jac was very limited as to what to choose when she was growing up, but so far she took a fancy to the chain that she held onto as a baby. All that jingling and chiming from all the rattling replaced the simple concept of a rattle toy. Hard, cold, but very sturdy and light, this was the initial object that she kept with her rather than risking her mother's notebook. Now that is an item too valuable to risk losing in some of her adventures for justice. She can't afford to put it in harms way. When locked away, the Fullbring item remains attached to the girl's neck, keeping it attached to the small ring loop at the center of the collar. This way, she has access to it at all times, and can always hear its chime as well.

However, when it is released is when it gets juicy. A proper, ideal weapon to really match the girl's sharp slender edge. It is because of what she wishes to accomplish that it needs to be as such; precise. Black steel, with a slight curl steel handle, the blades spine is riddled with jagged spinal edges that looks to be more of a saw, and lines from the sharp pointed hilt to the tip. As for the front edge of the knife, a slick near crescent curve is shown up to the other side of the tip, creating the sharp tooth like appearance. Decorated with a silver edge, a small ring is located at the front of the hilt, easy for Jac to spin and handle around her wrist.

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Main Fullbring Name: [The Bloody Mary] ["I am the bone of my sword."]

Main Fullbring Level 1 Property:

Now really look at the phrase that Jac speaks out when calling out Bloody Mary. It has a lot to do with her Fullbring ability. When awakened, the Fullbring's ability doesn't seem to be very glamorous or flashy but works well considering where she originated from. What Bloody Mary does is essentially turning Jac's own body into that of a weapon, bringing the concept of a blade into a physical persona. When activated, Jac's entire body becomes that of a edged blade. Skin, nails, hair, fingers, teeth, etc, her very existence itself becomes sharp as it were a sword. When contact with surfaces of her body, it would be as if touching the edge of a blade. This is done by infusing her strongest OS with that of her own body, hardening it at a molecular level. More so by really manipulating the levels of calcium, sharpening them, and directing them outwards like that of tiny hairs that cover the Human body.

For example, when slapping her face, the palm of the hand will be lacerated as if it were slapping the sharp edge of a knife. If kicking her in the shin, then it would be like kicking into a sword. When colliding with another blade, or weapon, against her skin, then sparks will fly off naturally since it would be a blade against another blade. And seeing that this turns her entire body into the concept of a "blade" Jac's skin is as durable/strong as her strongest OS. This does include how sharp the blade is as well.

However, this is only but a single form of the Bloody as it is unfocused, and very limited in terms of range. So, what happens when it is concentrated to individual points in the body? That is actually easy. For the science behind it, calcium would simply be gathered to the specified spots that Jac would mentally control, and use 50 reiatsu to manifest a single blade, ranging up to 5 feet in length. How thick or thin is depending on Jac's own will, but can not surpass the size of a buster sword or that of 5 feet in length. So very much like Cloud from Final Fantasy. How many of these blades can be made is a total of 5 at one time, each one costing a 50 reiatsu when doing so per each post. Yet, when this is done, even when doing for a single blade summon from the body, the entirety of the Fullbringer's body does not act like a blade. This means, it is like that of a normal Human body. So yes, before being able to use any of the blades, Jac has to concentrate her spiritual pressure in order to work her magic on those specific points around her body to summon the blades, which means that the concept of her entire body being a blade has to be turned off before she can do this.

However, when the individual blades are not in use, then the full body effect comes back into play once again.



Main Fullbring Level 2 Properties:

A Mother's Hand; this is the name in which Jac has given to the property that swipes with each and every blow that the Fullbringer does with a blade. What occurs when used is that when Jac uses a form of blade, when striking a surface, a secondary slash can be done to that same surface without the use of her arms, or that of a blade. Literally, like an invisible blade, or the wind itself, just happened to slash against the same surface of where Jac previous struck. Obviously that isn't the case. What really happens is that the property really does is sending a high pitched frequency that is so intense that causes a vibration to occur when contact is made with one of her blades. This vibration is then concentrated to a specific spot, which is to Jac's choosing, and creates an exact hack or slash wound to appear as what the initial blade strike would cause. For example, if Jac were to cut someone along the chest that is a foot long, another foot long slash will occur wherever Jac desires on that same surface.

But, how is the frequency even possible? Well, that is really due to Jac's own spiritual pressure, or rather her aura that causes it. Her spiritual pressure causes the intense frequency, and when contact is made with a blade from her causes the vibration to crawl along that surface. Where the slash occurs is completely up to Jac's own desire. However, since this is caused by her aura, spiritual pressure, there is only so far the frequency can travel via vibration along the surface. Very observant eyes can definitely find the limited ranged being up to 5 feet. 5 Feet is all that the frequency can travel up to on a surface before it completely dissipates and becomes unless. At the same time, the property itself has a trigger, which requires Jac to wound an individual to activate the property. If there was no means to trigger it, then it would useless. And yeah, this is for each time she inflicts a wound on someone before the property is activated. Also, this only works with hacks and slashes, never any stabby stabs.


Gore is the second property on this list. Simplistic on how it works as it requires a wound to start off with. After a cut has been made by one of Jac's blades, the wound then radiates with an intense burning sensation. Ever pulled a muscle, or have a nerve burn from the inside and required a deep tissue massage? Well, think of that but worse. Like fire smoldering the inside of that wound. Now, this doesn't mean that something is really going on inside. Nope nope. All that is really happening is that Gore causes the damaged surface area to burn immensely to cause great discomfort to the person. This intense burning sensation causes the wound to emit a bright orange light outwardly to be seen by those around.

Pain Tolerance: a 1 in this skill helps to reduce to the pain. A minor reduction of it as it goes from an intense burning sensation to that of a severe painful agitation. At this point the wound does still effect motor functions of the area, but now possible able to move them. Now, with a 2 in this skill reduces the pain to that of stinging sensation that is felt deep within the tissue, and surrounding area. Although it is like a bitter stinging, the effected area has no issue with movement. But obviously, the 3 in this category helps to reduce the pain to that of a nuisance. It is still present and felt but the pain is pushed back as it nags constantly but not given into it.



And lastly, Rampage will probably put most people down for the count. When cutting a person, Rampage begins to take effect. When cut by one of Jac's blades, the wound that is inflicted causes twice the amount of pain that has been caused. In addition, any cut, or pain that is now inflicted is now doubled from what it is. So say if someone gets a paper-cut, ouch right. But with Rampage it is more like being cut with a knife rather than that of a sheet of paper. A stab wound will feel like that entire area is being cut even deeper. Hell, even a stomach-ache can be classified as taking very powerful laxatives. While the property remains active, so do the effects, but when deactivated, then so do the effects fade away.

Pain Tolerance here can help to moderate the amount of pain that courses through the wound. Normally, the pain would be about 5 times of what would be inflicted on the person. With Pain Tolerance 1, the pain is reduced a bit. Not much to really help in keeping it back, but enough to be able to move the damaged area while still feeling the pain. Now, while with a 2 in the skill, it does help to reduce the pain. Rather than it being 5 times the amount of pain, it is reduced to only feeling 3 times the amount. So while a paper cut would originally be that of a being cut with a knife, now it is very much like being cut with very firm edge of a cardboard box. Still hurts a bit more than the usual, but at least it isn't like before. But 3 of course offers the best of the best in terms of reduction, as it reduces to that of a papercut, but slowly extended as it was meant to be.





Secondary Fullbring Appearances:

Well, it had to be another relic left by her mother; the collar. While the chain itself holds a lot of significance to her as a baby, it is the collar that serves as a sort of symbol. It was only until she was older that she realized what it was, and what it seemed to be for her mother, and to herself. A small leather collar that is strapped to the girl's neck, and is where the chain hangs from. It is the same exact collar that her mother wore, though cared for with some touch ups to help the material last longer and retain a much more cleaner, and newer appeal to it. So yeah, Jac has taken care of it.

When released, the Fullbring appearance of it slightly changes, blossoming two tails that extend outwards from the back and coil around the frame of the girl. The material itself changes to make it so much like a black veil, and its length constantly changing to match Jac's exact shape and size. Sooooo, which means it extends itself, or shortens itself, when Jac moves around in order to prevent her from tripping over it, or even being tangled. Though, the purpose of this change is strictly based on for its power, rather than itself apparel design.



Secondary Fullbring Properties:

What comes from the newly form collar is something rather ghastly. Something that anyone wouldn't want to get in contact with the faintest of traces. Rather than used for killing than that of her Main Fullbring, what this little baby does is reorganizing an individual's thoughts to painfully paint over Jac's own existence by using memories of those that they deem "important." Which means in lamest terms that Jac becomes someone who are precious those who come into contact with this Fullbring. And how does Fullbring do that? An airborne toxin. You see, when activated, Jac's collar emits a rather purple haze around her body. This haze covers much of her figure, though not really having any property in actually hiding her body, just as an effect. Or very much representing her aura, or that of her spiritual pressure that is seeping out of her body. This toxin is has a odor that mirrors that of strong Lavender, which can be detected at a range of 7 feet from her person.

Once inhaled, the toxin works its way through the body and into the brain, attacking the nerves and those that trigger memories. These attacked nerves causes the mind and senses to forcibly rescript Jac's overall existence to that of the person they value most in their life. A mother, daughter, father, son, etc. Smells and sounds that come from Jac from this point become an exact duplicate of that particular person, even that of the Lavender aroma that comes off of the Fullbringer. There is no telling them apart. Hell, even Jac's own body is scripted in the image of that person. There is really no telling that this is a illusion as both the body and mind are attacked aggressively by the toxin. However, that isn't the most dangerous property of the ability. The danger lies within its after math as Jac's physical description becomes blurry, unrecognizable. At least in their memories. Beyond this, the toxin is rather harmless, aside from the slight migraines that is caused from the victim's own mind being forced to rewrite Jac's very being with someone who they treasure. This does not provide any form of stealth to Jac, and must be inhaled. At the same time, the illusion, of being a loved/treasure person, is instantly removed if Jac causes the smallest amount of pain to the victim, no matter in what shape or form, aside from what potential memories the victim may have of that person. It is because of this that the illusion falls apart, and the dream comes to an end.

For this is the reason why the property is called, "Remember Me."

However, since this is caused by a toxin to apply its illusion effects, there are some means to resist a full blown take over, or at least have the effects lesser than what they are. Illusion Resistance helps by slowly seeing through the fake identity that Jac is assuming. Every 4 posts that goes by a single physical characteristic would change back to that of Jac's original characteristic. Eyes would change back, hair, clothes, voice, then face. For each level in this category will reduce the post needing for one characteristic to change back in the effected person's senses. So, with Illusion Resistance 1 every 3 posts a physical characteristic will change back. A 2 would have every 2 posts change a feature back. And then 3 in this skill have have each post change back a physical feature.

As for Poison Resistance, it will take longer for the effects to take effect. For each level in this skill, it will take longer for the effects to take hold of the person until they become immune if they have a superior OS hue. Level 1 will require 3 posts after exposure for the toxin to take effect. A level 2 will require 4 posts to take effect. And then level 3 will need 5 posts to take effect. Of course, it is at this point in time that if the effected person(s) have a higher OS then they can become immune to the effects.



Be One is quite simple. Be one with the environment. Not just simple camouflage by any standards, as Jac's own body can merge with that of any physical surface, becoming one with that said surface. This does not count as a disguise but helps to move along surface to surface to avoid physical detection by the eyes, ears, and nose. By bending her spiritual pressure to that of a surface, Jac's own body takes on the material in which she merges with in order to help her blend better into the said surface. There is even a half-state, in which a portion of her body can remain merged with the physical surface, while a part of her body is out of it. Not that Jac can't use the merged material to harden her body to be used as a weapon, but more to the fact that it helps keep her body odor away from being smelled. In which case, Energy Sensory can help locate her position since she is constantly using her spiritual pressure to help her merge with it. Energy Sensory below 50 would make it difficult to really find Jac in this state, including with the additional 50 points with every level in the Skill Stealth. Levels in Anti-Stealth can help cancel these additional point requirement buildups by 50 points for each level, like, Anti-Stealth 1, 2, or 3, by 50 points for each rank earned. This even goes for when she is half merged with a surface. In this state, Jac can be detected as a portion of her body remains exposed from the surface.

[Jacqueline ACK]

-History-

Birthplace: [Outskirts of Karakura Town]

Current Residence: [Karakura Town]

Memorable Figures: [Dad]

History:

Crying all she could remember. The crying, the screaming of so many people. And the chill that filled the air when she did so. Much of it was a blur. Like all children at that age, Jac can not recall much about her birth, and her so called father didn't wish to speak about the details. What he did tell her was just a few things about her mother. He told her that she did things. Terrible things she assumed since he did not wish to speak very much about her either. In her mind, the lack of those details didn't paint a very flattering picture in her mind. Only made her wonder all the more as to what her mother did, and who she was. One of those details that her father figure told her, one of the few details about her mother was she loved Jac. She loved her child to the point of insuring her survival. It would be later on that Jac would be told what happened. Or at least, what he suspected that happened to her.

Already, Jac's life was a very unusual one. Unlike other children, the girl herself seemed foreign. Like, foreign within being foreign. Her hair and eyes didn't match, and those people around her kept themselves distant from her. Like, as if something about her didn't feel right to them. It wasn't just her appearance that gave them the heeby-jeebies, but the fact that Jac was growing, developing much more quicker than that of her classmates. Both physically, and mentally, the new born baby had been developing each day since her conception. While it would have taken years to achieve maturity, Jac's body was already undergoing the process of such a life cycle. Obviously, not like a few over nights that it happened. Like in months to that of a year.

Believing it to be a life threatening disease, her father brought her into his work place. Being examined day and night, Jac spent a majority of her life in a hospital. Kept away from people until they found that it wasn't a disease. Left alone, trapped in a cubicle that doubled as her room, Jac spent her life in solitude. Yeah, some Doctors came in and out talking about some mumbo-jumbo type crap. Often relating it to her circumstance, and with that different possibilities and theories that may be the cause of her accelerated growth. It was painful. The feeling of her bones and muscles expanding without a sense of control. Stretch out and increasing in mass as days and weeks went by. It hurt like no other. However, it did give her Father a reason to hand her the notebook that was given to him by her mother. This was solely meant to help keep her mind off the pain, while at the same time giving the girl but at the same time to give her some details revolving around the deceased woman.

Pages were torn from the book. Maybe her mom did it because she didn't like what she wrote? Quite possibly be the reason. Although incomplete, Jac still found herself amazed by the stories that her mother wrote. Monsters that wore white masks. People in black cloaks fighting against the people in white. It all seemed like a fantasy story that people would often revolve around Manga or Anime. None of that mattered to Jac though. Because for the first time, she got to learn some things about her Mom. She was gone yeah, but some part of her stayed with her in that notebook. Both saddened and happy, Jac kept the notebook close to her as evidence of the sacrifice of what she did for her. She would come to treasure this book.

A few months went by, and already Jac had grown to what the Doctors called a "Preteen." She wasn't infectious. Not capable of spreading to other people, she was allowed to wander about the hospital. Very much like quarantine, the Fullbringer child was not able to leave the hospital unless she was chaperoned. Any who, finally being able to move around she was capable of seeing many things. Shadowing her father through many of his research areas, and that of his other duties. Performing operations, drawing blood, the little was exposed to so much during her stay. Despite looking a small as she was, her mind continued to grow much faster than that of her own body's development. Here, she began to process and understand the Human anatomy. However, even after taking in the more simple details about the body, there had always been but one thing that her Father didn't seem to see, or know about; the energy that came from the few people in the Hospital, and that same energy that she saw around herself in the mirror.

A form of light energy that flowed around her body. Something that no one else could see. She asked her father what it was, but he couldn't see it. All that he noted was that her mother had the same thing about her. The same thing that made her mother and herself special. Yet, her father still couldn't understand. But Jac did. The Vandenreich, Hollows, and Shinigami. Each of these groups had a connection to her mother. A connection that her father refused to talk about. Missing pages, and a man who refused to give her the answers that could fill in the gaps to her own understanding. The man knew something and wasn't going to tell her. So, she did some checking herself. Nothing in his office revealed the information that she sought out. As such, she followed him home during those rare occasions. Living in the hospital gave her many routes to escape from. Learning the ins and outs of the hospital, she took her time of when to get out, and what times to come back. So, she followed him.

She followed him back to the house in which she lived in before the hospital. She lurked around in the shadows until he slept. Through the draws, cabinets, desks, she peered through every little nook and cranny. She continued to search until she found it. She found them. Pages torn from the notebook, and articles related to the incidents that were labeled along them. Murders. Killings by the dozens. So many of them that happened to be linked to another. The pages that were missing told of other stories. Her mom killed people. People who did wrong things, for those who were obsessed with a cult religion. People who hurt her mom, and nothing happened to them. The injustice in the world by those who were suppose to help. Instead, what they did was misuse their power to do terrible things. Her mom died protecting her from people who were looking to hurt her. They took her mother away from her.

Her father was suppose to protect the child that was he left in charge of. Keep her from knowing as stated in the notebook. All that he did was to insure that Jac lived an ordinary life, and away from the Hell that her mother was cooped up in. Her mom was forcibly trapped into the world in which these groups put her into. Them, and those who misused their power and authority. Those who sought to do harm unto others, and did so without remorse or care. She has seen what her mother spoke about in the hospital that her father works in. A few Doctors who misuse their power to hurt others, knowing full well that there are some people who could no afford to pay, or who simply have their way with their patients for their own gains. In the notebook, her mom described a world full of lies, concealed behind a mask. And for those who were like her mom could only see the truth.

Her mom knew the truth.

Beyond that time, she kept it a secret. Looking to see what sort of world resided around her. A place that was meant to be a haven to help people, was nothing more than a structure of lies and deceit. Her mom wanted to put an end to it all. She wanted to keep Jac away from such a world. Although it was what her mother wanted for her, Jac already knew that it wasn't going do anything. Nothing would change. What happened to her Mom would only happen to others around her. Didn't matter who they were, but the injustice done unto them would be the same, and there would be no one around to punish them for it. For that reason, Jac's hands had to be the one to do. Only she could do it. On that night, a year later after her birth, Jac took her first life. A Doctor in the hospital who was using this authority to molest female patients. The first time that she felt some sort of liberation from the world around her. Some sort of freedom from the world that decided to lie to her, and to her Mom.

Her body was no longer that of a child. A young woman at the peak of her life. A woman who was also a child still inside. A rage that could not be held in any longer. She laughed. She laughed so hard that she couldn't stop. Laughing at the world around her. At a world that tried its best to keep the truth from her. Her body stopped its accelerated growth. But didn't seize her willingness to grow. No longer would she confine herself to the world that others desired her to reside in. She would make her own world. A world beyond which was sane.





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[Pie]

Hey there! Sorry it took a minute for us to get to this. Ray was gonna do round one for you, but then he got hit by a hurricane… so I’ll be handling the first round for you.

Opening

Looks like you started this before chat names were on the template. At the very top of your app, just above passwords, please add your Discord Username.

Outside of that, looks like everything is in order.

Appearance

Thank you for actually including the name of your faceclaim! I manage that thread, so I super appreciate that.

This section SUPER exceeds minimums. Good job on this section!

Personality

Dislikes are actually one below minimum. Please add one.

Everything else is either at minimum or well above it through, so overall you did solid work here. Just that one dislike to add and you’re all set!

Fighting Style
Well above the minimums. I hope to see some of those poisons and such either in your Fullbring or in items. You have a lot of things going on there, and please just keep in mind that those all need to either be covered by her Fullbring or by appropriate techniques/items.

Powers

Nice fate meme.

Level 1

You’ve actually made this a bit too weak in some ways, but potentially too powerful in others. You don’t specify anything about durability in here, but given that you’re going for the “everything about me is a blade” gimmick, then I’m assuming you’re going for an armor property on that. If so, please make that obvious and explicit. If you’re going for full body coverage, then superior OS to your highest spiritual stat should be the requirement to damage you. As for the cost on that property? Remove it. That’s what your Fullbring’s release cost is for.

For the ability to make swords, cut the cost in half, and remove the drawback of it turning off your main ability. Right now your costs are higher than they need to be on a basic ability like this. 50 reiatsu is sufficient to justify making more material to summon a sword. As far as I can tell, this is just blade creation, and not any kind of control on them or anything, so 50 is plenty.

Level 2

Once again, remove the per-use cost on this. This should just be a passive effect, as that’s how fullbrings work. You don’t need a cost for an effect like this.

Other than that, can you do me a favor and explicitly state something like “This property only triggers when one wound is actually inflicted. It requires one wound to make another, and the wounds must be on the same target.” Without something like that, a lot of how you worded this sounds kinda like it autohits, or could hit other people if you hit yourself. Any kind of autohit is no bueno, so we want to be clear about not doing that.

Other than that, you are missing two properties. Please add two more properties to your level two.

Secondary Fullbring

I’m getting some Tsukishima vibes from this thing. The effect is pretty specific and limited though, so I’m mostly okay with it. Given that you’ve called it both a toxin and an illusion, please explain how Poison Resist and Illusion Resist skills interact with this ability. Secondary Fullbring Properties are also limited to Two word names, so maybe you can call this effect “Treasured Jack” or something?

Once again, you are missing a property. Secondary Fullbring has two properties. Please add one.

History

Enjoyable read. I like the direction you took with this character. It’s unique on this site to my knowledge, which is fairly rare. It ties the character together pretty well.

Conclusion
You definitely lowballed the power on some of the things you did submit, especially if the little details I’m reading into things (like the armor property at stage 1 and the auto-hitty nature of stage 2) are just me thinking too much. Add that one dislike, some more Fullbring properties, and you’re well on your way to a ½!

[Jacqueline ACK]

Kaykay, let do this hue:

Discord name as been put up hue.


Personality/Dislikes has been updated with an additional dislike to the mix hue.


Fighting Style, that is a definitely gonna be added later on hue when she gets rolling, hue.


Fullbring Level 1 Property,

Took out the costs and changed the reiatsu cost for making individual blades down to 50.

Added the durability to the Fullbring ability and sharpness of it too.

But, I wanna keep the disadvantage when creating the blades since without it, I'm thinking that the overall will be a little too powerful without something to make an open spot to be exploited by others, so it adds a potential opening for it too hue.


For Level 2,

Took away the reiatsu costs, and added the clause that you suggestion on "making a wound" first before triggering the property.

Also, added two more properties to the mix too on top of that one hue.


Secondary Fullbring,

Added the Illusion Resistance and Poison Clauses to it hue.

And yup, changed the phrase to it too hue.

Also, added another property like you asked too hue.



I think that covers everything, but let meh know if more is needed, ya? Hehehe, thanks again hue.

[Pie]

Level 1
I'd recommend changing mentions of spiritual pressure into "her strongest spiritual stat." I wont force the change, but it gives you more flexibility if you want to change builds later.

I can respect the desire to aim for balance. Here's a thought as a middle ground, which you can either implement or not. Since you're capped at five blades, why not have 20% of her body return to normal for each blade that's made, rather than having it cap at five arbitrarily? You could let her reabsorb all her blades to toggle the armor effect back on too.

Neither of these changes NEED to be implemented. They are recommendations.

Mother's Hand
Yeah, looking at how this is worded I think this is fine as-is.

Gore
Since this is pain related, specify how it interacts with Pain Tolerance please. Otherwise I'm fine with this.

Rampage
Yeah, this seems fine as well. Just clarify how it interacts with Pain Tolerance again here and I'm totally fine with it.

For both Gore and Rampage, as these are Bankai level abilities, you could probably combine them into one property and get away with it without any real issue. They are thematic, but you can get away with more if you want to.

Remember Me
With the skill interactions spell out, no further changes requested here. Good job.

Be One
Forced ES and sensories always fall under high scrutiny per Section 7. I'm a bit confused about your wording on ES though, as you specify "below 175 wouldn't make it difficult." For values on this, I'm going to suggest a base requirement of 50 ES to detect her while this is active, increased by 50 per rank of stealth. As you said, she's constantly using her spiritual pressure, so it shouldn't be that hard, and 50 is the "average" investment. Still, it lets her get the drop on people if she invests into stealth, and they invested in neither ES nor anti-stealth.

I'd remove letting Analysis counter this, as it doesn't really make sense to me.

I'd also remove the instinct requirements entirely, as it shouldn't really interact with this ability directly, since there are a lot more circumstantial factors that tend to play in with that kind of stuff, especially when stacking it with stealth levels.

Outside of those changes, there's one thing I want clarified. Does Jack only have the states of "fully merged into something" and "fully not merged into it" or can she like stick an arm out of the wall to stab you while keeping her body safe? Okay, I lied, more questions. What happens if I blast the wall that Jak is in? If she can half-manifest, is it correct to assume that the detection requirements of Be One are ignored for the part of her that is outside the wall/object?

Closing
Looks like we got most of what needs to be changed covered. Minor changes to a few things, and some clarification for Be One is needed, but we're pretty dang close to a 1/2.

[Jacqueline ACK]

Alrighty, let's go again hehehe:


Level 1:

Made the changes that you specified by adding the last sentence about turning off the blades to fully access the full-body blade. All others I would like to keep the same hue. Thanks hehe.



Both, Gore and Rampage:

Pain Tolerance has been added to the big sha-bang hue.



For Be One:

Added the clause at the end about being "half-merged" and if can be detected while like that; so yeah she can be found.

Analysis and Instinct sections taken out hue.

And thanks for the scrutiny talk too, just want to make sure that it is balanced out too. As for that, made the changes from 175 to 50 as suggested.



Let me know if there are any other changes needed, just let meh know hue. Thankies.

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Class 8 with 350 starting SP.

[Jacqueline ACK]

Lunacy Lunatic Class 8 Rank 1


Strength - 50 (/30%) = 35

Speed - 75 (/30%) = 52.5

Spiritual Pressure - 50 (*x3) = 150

Reiatsu Strength - 50 (/30%) = 35

Light Aura - 30

Dark Aura - 70

Instinct - 75 (/30%) = 52.5

Senses - 50 (/30%) = 35

Energy sensory - 0

Healing Expertise - 0


SP Total: 350



Skills:

1. Strength of Will: 1

2. Stealth: 1

3. Knives: 1

4. Battle Analysis: 1

5. Poison Craft: 1

6. Pain Tolerance: 1

7. Blood Loss Resistance: 1


SKP: 7/15