Post by Johnwaluigi on Jul 23, 2017 14:04:42 GMT -5
Alright, I’ll be grading this.
The Electricity theme is perfectly fine, however there are two parts with which I take issue - because I think they go against the “unrefined” nature of a Kenpachi’s power.
Firstly, the ability to localise the electricity to a single part of his body (finger) being the example you used. I think he should be unable to localise the electricity to any location smaller than his limbs (so, powering one arm or leg is fine), however using the power locally should have some drawback. Perhaps it burns the skin at the place where you localised the electricity?
Secondly, the ability to fire small projectiles. I don’t mind the arcs of lightning, but I think being able to create small projectiles which later explode goes against what a Kenpachi would be able to do. I’d ask that if you want a projectile, please make it less refined and more difficult to control.
Once those changes are made, this should be good to go.
The Electricity theme is perfectly fine, however there are two parts with which I take issue - because I think they go against the “unrefined” nature of a Kenpachi’s power.
Firstly, the ability to localise the electricity to a single part of his body (finger) being the example you used. I think he should be unable to localise the electricity to any location smaller than his limbs (so, powering one arm or leg is fine), however using the power locally should have some drawback. Perhaps it burns the skin at the place where you localised the electricity?
Secondly, the ability to fire small projectiles. I don’t mind the arcs of lightning, but I think being able to create small projectiles which later explode goes against what a Kenpachi would be able to do. I’d ask that if you want a projectile, please make it less refined and more difficult to control.
Once those changes are made, this should be good to go.
