Second Strike

[Impossible]

Technique Name: [Lightning Spear]

Class: [3]

Technique Type: [Kido]

Usable By: [Human World Dwellers]

Technique Element: Lightning]

Technique Description and Effects: [Lightning Spear is exactly that, a spear made from lighting, or at least electricity. The spear is as strong as the user's highest offensive stat, and can pierce or cut through anything with a lower stat. Class clash applies normally. Anything that this spear cuts or pieces, will be shocked with electricity, becoming a lighting rod. The post following, whatever was hit will be struck by lighting, moving at 800 speed, with rs equal to the highest offensive stat of the user, as well as turn all electrical abilities with equal or less rs into homing attacks to them for the post. Thunder will roar the moment before the lightning falls from the sky.

Caster Does not need a skill to throw the spear accurately. Spear moves with a speed of 500.]

How to use technique: [By paying a cost of 350 reiatsu, the spear is formed in the user's hand.]

Technique Drawbacks: [The spear must be thrown that post, or it will turn the effect into the caster. After the spear strikes something, it vanishes.

Those struck with the spear can still dodge the lightning, should they move at the right time.]

Made By: [Impossible]

Reserved?: [No]

[Johnwaluigi]

Alright, I'll be the first line of grading for this.

This does far too much, in my opinion. Having both a weapon, and the effect that "anything it touches will be struck by lightning in the following post", without consuming the spear for no extra cost? If it is to have any effects beyond just creating a lightning spear, they should have costs - and their speed should be slightly lower.

Also, please refrain from posting new techniques for grading every day. It clogs the admin queue. It would be much appreciated if you made a batch of up to 5 techniques (in a single thread), and then submitted them all at once. Thanks.

[Impossible]

Okay, did changes.

[Johnwaluigi]

Unfortunately, I still think the technique is still just too powerful. The second 'hit', in the form of the of the lightning bolt, just causes too much extra damage. Would it be too much to ask that that effect be removed, and just leave that the target becomes a homing target for any electrical techniques? I would be ok with lowering the cost and class if that change was made.

Also, the line "Caster Does not need a skill to throw the spear accurately" should be removed. Techniques shouldn't compensate for a lack of skills in that sense, in my opinion.

[Kento Waffles]

1/1 when John's fixes are made.

[Impossible]

Sorry, too high, I'm ditching this