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Miho chased her just like the weak rat she was. Like a game of tag or something. Deadly tag. Yuka had done this with Miho. Her one, true master. Yuka was like Miho's dad. But that man was a true bastard. Treated her like her own and then told the one closest to her to kill her off. It was a horrible end fitting for a horrible, rotten girl. It's part of the reason as to why Miho is an arrancar and why she has her powers. Negativity; her life was full of it.
Miho followed after her, she had energy sensory. No one was going to get her unawares. No one. Miho could anticipate attacks easily. She could let out a cero right now if she wanted to. But Sonken Kouhai would be up her ass about that. She was afraid of him. Scary ass man...just thinking about him made her afraid to think about him. If that made any sense. He was able to figure out her powers just by touching her heart and listening to it. It was scary as fuck.
Miho side stepped, avoiding her swing and swatted Rosalie away with her saw. She survived the hour. Congrats. But now they had more important things to do. "I guess you got somewhat decent-ish" she spat. "It ain't good enough though.." she said walking towards her. She did improve though. Her plans got better. Miho unfortunately, couldn't spend a very long time here. All that was left was for Rose to train on her own.
OOMPH! Rosalie was swatted aside as easily as a fly. She gasped for breath and stood up, using her buster sword as a crutch. However, at Miho's words, she straightened up, sheathing her buster sword. A smile blossomed across her features. I guess I'll be seeing you then, Miho Shoga ... And she walked off into the sunset, all the more happier.
The quality was poor in several of the posts, especially at the beginning. Many of your 'paragraphs' were small, and barely constituted as actual paragraphs. At current, the training is only worth 475 CTP out of the possible 650 you could have gotten had you fleshed it out a bit more.