One Dirty Birdy (Rampage)(DP)

[Maria Ashwin]

A thick fog rolled in over karakura as the sun receded beyond the horizon, the temperature fell with the sun. The homes of this small backwater town would all begin turning out their lights , the occasional street light giving enough light to feel slightly secure in the night ; and casting just enough shadow for the predators of the knight to lurk in the alleyways searching for their next meal ticket. But our story doesn't take place in bustling solem homes of karakura town but in the chaotic mall a hall of bargains meant to draw in wary souls , This place would become the feeding ground of an unsuspecting creature small and neon green.

Marik would slowly open his eyes as the screech of car tires echoed through the parking structure , the smell of exhaust fumes filling his nostrils , the beep of a car locking and then what would be responsible for his awakening the rumbling deep within his stomach. ‘...hmm hungry need to eat’ he would think to himself as he slowly stood in his nest wobbling a bit as he stood , taking a moment to flutter his little hummingbird wings getting a repeating motion going till he was flitting about around his nest a composit of mud and string packed against the top of one the many support beams in the parking structure. He would then slowly hover downward his wings beating in rapid unison as he hovered looking from one end of the parking structure to another.

“Hungry” he would pitafully squeak as he darted toward the other end of the parking structure , drool leaking from his tiny beak as he flew through the parking structure he would stop every once in awhile eyeing family’s coming and going. ‘Mmm to small not enough!’ he would think to himself as he continued down toward the exit of the structure. Marik was indeed truly starving but he had no intention of picking of crumbs he intended enjoy himself a true banquet of souls , and to do that he had to find a place where these morsal’s gathered.

He would wince as he exited the structure coming face to face with another large structure with large glass doors that seemed to be sliding open and closed , he would make a mad dash for the door’s darting inside and flying around toward the ceiling of the building. He was enthralled for a moment at all the shiny glass and platforms housing multiple shops and store fronts , but what caught his eye the most was the bounty of human souls before him he would let out a warped shrill hummingbird cry as he began to case the area. Taking notes of the exit’s he would then put his plan into action , as he gathered what little riatsu he could muster in his three inch body and begin firing Jūdan (銃 弾 , Bullet) at the platforms supporting pillars in an attempt to cause mass destruction.

He would Then Aim for the floor level exit’s trapping those who hadn’t ran during the first volley of attacks , “Yum! Yum! I eat then i get sleep!” he would cheer in his shrill voice as he reveled in the chaos being sown by himself. Not waiting to survey the area he would then fly along the ceiling blasting it , causing the roof to cave in flaming debris falling down upon the civilians below. Being unable to cave the roof in completely he would effectively be making sky light sized holes in the roof , while the flaming debris would work below spreading quickly and hungrily. He would watch with glee as his stomach rumbled watching the souls rise from the fallen corpses of his victims , he would swoop down among the inferno flying up to souls rapidly and in hummingbird fashion he would plunge his beak deep into the souls of the fallen and sip their essence like that of a flower.

He would repeat this action action over and over drinking deeply from the fallen , and plunging his beek into the skulls of those pinned under rubble coaxing their clinging souls from their bodies.”out!out! I eat you! Then sleep!” he would chime in frustration as he plunged his beak into the eye of an old man over and over , driving his beak a little deeper each time till the mans souls released it’s hold on life. Like a vulture he would spring upon the mans souls slurping it down like that of a jello shot at a frat party , He would the continue on looking through the rubble in search of more souls to add to his gullet before he found a place to sleep once more. ‘I need something more filling!’ he would scream internally as he dive bombed yet another soul from above adding it to the many now sloshing around in his gullet.

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Consomed: Human Class 8 x6

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Strength: 40

Speed: 40



Spiritual Pressure: 40 type boost -> 50

Riatsu Strength: 40 type boost -> 50



Light Aura: 50

Dark Aura: 50



Instinct: 40 type Gimp -> 30

Sense: 40 type Gimp -> 30



Energy Sensory: 40

Healing Expertise: 0 [perma locked 0]

[Maria Ashwin]

The smell of ash would waft upon the wind as the crys of citizens of filled the air , clouds of soot reflecting the eerie green light of the flames within the night sky. Marik would give a satisfied sigh of contempt as he sat perched on the railing of the parking structure’s top floor , he would open his bloody beak wide and let out a yawn as he was growing tired having slept for so many years his hunger had reached new peaks. With these new peaks of hunger meant he would have to binge eat unlike any hollow that came before him , his lazy nature was starting to become a hinderance but due to the way he hunts it was becoming increasingly hard for those who would see him slain catch up to him. ‘I want to sleep..’ he would think to himself as his stomach growled loudly once more , he would give a little sigh as the dull pain in his stomach made itself known once more. “But im still hungry” he pouted out as he fluttered his wings giving the area a generous spattering of caked ash and blood as he cleaned his wings.

Normally most hollows would make their escape right about now , as a shinigami would surely be close behind , but Marik’s will to remain lazy kept him right there resting his wings and waiting for the main course to arrive. He would suppress his spiritual pressure as he waited , seeing as he looked like a normal hummingbird say for his mask he felt he would have atleast a modicum of camoflauge. He would stay in this spot for many hours watching the flames roar within the building before him , allowing himself to be mesmerized by the beauty of the dancing flames. Something within him seemed to stir at the sight of it all a feeling of comfort…of purpose..or maybe all the souls he just ate gave him gas. ‘W..where am i…’ he would think to himself as he slowly felt his eyelids growing heavy.

He wouldn’t be left alone on the scene for much longer as the thrumming boom of shunpo reverberated through the area , startling the little guy immediately putting his head on swivel as he surveyed the area from his perch. The hummingbirds stomach would give a mighty growl his eyes locked upon not one , not two but three shinigami. dangerous quarry he knows but if he where to strike first and make a decisive blow he could end things quickly and be on his way with a full stomach and enough reserves to sleep for months…but then that raised the question was it worth it he had just eaten a buffet of souls after his first six he had spent the better part eating the remaining souls in the area. Provided he had missed some he could wait till they sent those spirits to the other side before swoop in on them. For now he would beat his little wings gently and weave his way between the parked cars below slowly inching his way forward being carful not to be seen , flying low to the ground taking advantage of his small size.

Once he was roughly twenty or so feet away from the small group of shinigami he would lower himself upon the pavement beneath a mini-van , being carful to slow his breathing as he listened in waiting for his chance to strike. The three soul reapers possessed the appearance of burly looking men , marik himself couldn’t give them points in the looks department , the biggest one looked like he smashed his face into brick walls competitively ; while the other two looked like humanoid tucan’s with how big their noses where and for some damn reason they had bright blue Mohawks. ‘Fashion….has declined since i died’ he would think to himself , a little taken aback at his slowly restoring vocabulary maybe eating souls did more than fill his stomach. ‘Ok so flat face is now frying pan ass face , and the other two are big nose one and two’ he would think to himself as he stared at them from his hiding spot just in shock at their outlandish appearance.

-Enter Soul Reaper-

Hara would give a gruff sigh as dug in his ear with his pinky an unamused look on his face as he looked at the smouldering building , “ugh damn hollows getting brazen these days , we’ll split and konso any soul the fucker didn’t eat” he would grunt out as he gave a satisfied sigh flicking a thick wad of earwax onto the asphalt. “And Roki and Nara try not to die would you , we still have a sake tab to pay off” he would say with a light chuckle as he began walking away from his companions , Marik only mere feet away hidden from site would gag at the sight of that disguting wad of ear wax. Being a bird he himself prided himself on keeping his feathers clean , and for someone to be this agregiously disgusting was offensive on so many levels it almost broke his little bird heart to see this all unfold.

Roki would make his way to the parking lot while Nara and Hara made their way the now blazing inferno that was the humans mall , “why are we always the ones that have to go deal with these low level threats” The one named roki would grumble as he traversed his way through the parking structure. ‘I’m a trained warrior i should be out there killing arrancar’s! Like a true shinigami of old!’ he would think to himself as he sighed turning a corner only to be met with an explosion of green flames and then darkness. The last thing he would see before all his sight went completely dark was a small neon green hummingbird , with a mask made of bone perched atop it’s skull.

-Return to Marik-

Marik would chirp happily as he stabbed his beeek into the face the downed shinigami , sucking the particles that made up his being within himself. The feeling in so many words was indescribable for him the dense reishi and spiritual pressure made him feel almost full a unique sensation , ‘ahh almost full then i can finally get some damned sleep’ he would inernally grumble to himself as the body of the soul reaper dissipated into his mouth leaving only his uniform behind. Marik would flap his wings happily as he once more took to hovering in the air before blasting the uniform as well starting another small fire.

With a small chirp marik would dart off to the still burning mall soaring high into the sky peering down into the burning structure through the holes he had punched through the roof , their black Shihakusho making the stand out amongst the green flames made aiming his attacks that much easier. Gathering his riatsu he would fire at the roof causing it to further cave in, the resulting explosions causing the flames surge forth with an even greater intensity. He would wait till most of the fire had burnt out and flap his way down to find the charred corpses of the two shinigami , takeing his time to savor the char broiled meal before fluttering off to go find a new nest for himself. ‘Time to get some sleep’ he would think to himself as he fluttered his wings and took to the sky leaving this charred derelict behind the souls resting comfortably within his stomach , he would let out a happy chirp as the cool night air rushed beneath his wings as the neon green humming bird hollow flys off into the distance in search of a new nest.

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Paragraph Count: 10
Consumed: Human Rank 8 x4 , Shinigami Rank 8 x3

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Strength: 40
Speed: 40


Spiritual Pressure: 40 type boost -> 50
Riatsu Strength: 40 type boost -> 50


Light Aura: 50
Dark Aura: 50


Instinct: 40 type Gimp -> 30
Sense: 40 type Gimp -> 30


Energy Sensory: 40
Healing Expertise: 0 [perma locked 0]

[Kitai Yoru]

I count 14 paragraphs, which equal to 140 TP. Your consumption rate was pretty high, so you earn 700 for what you've consumed, totaling to 840 TP earned. Well done.