Mythik's Training

[Mythik]

Mythik stands about 5'3. He has black hair that is about shoulder width. He usually wears a black hoodie that has a spade shape in white on the front. He has black pants that are worn an ripped in some places most around the knees and the shins, but are just holes. He has black dress shoes. He holds two blades. One being his zanpakuto, and his other blade that looks identical.

He has gloves on his hands that have hidden knives that are released with the pull of a string he has attached to a lever on the wrist, that is hidden. It blends in with the color of his gloves which are black. On his side is a belt that has a pouch with money, and other valuables that he has stolen, for he is also a thief.

Next to him is a dragon that isn't for battle. The dragon listens to everything he tells him to do. One of the main things he has the dragon do is look ahead of Mythik when traveling to see if there is any enemies to watch out ahead of him. He is able to communicate with the dragon through his thoughts.

Mythik told the dragon to stay back through mental communication. As he did he held the two blades firmly and started to spin rapidly with his blades out. There was a tree with a target nailed on it ahead of him. While he was spinning, he attempted to attack it, but just missed barely. He knew he could do better. He was having one of those days where he couldn't do his best.

He jumped back and attempted it again. He started to spin rapidly with his blades out. The blades scratched against the target rapidly, and pieces of wood were flying out. His dragon was jumping side to side dodging with would pieces. He started to spin a little too much and the tree started to fall. His dragon flew back dodging it.

He laughed and sheathed the blades. He wanted to also practice his Kidou. He nailed another target to a tree and stood back, his blades still sheathed. "Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south! Hado 31! Shakkaho!" He shouted and a ball of red fire shot from the palm of his hand destroying the target and blowing a hole right through the tree. The hole was a complete circle.

He picked up his things and went into his tent to rest. His training was done for the moment. Mythik was kind of worn out, and wanted a break. The tent was a one man tent and was a light brown with a red top. There was a sleeping back and a flashlight inside. His dragon usually slept outside, because well, he's a dragon!

[Zou ۞]

Original TP: 25

Points docked for: Changing of tense

New TP: 15

+15

[Mythik]

Mythik finished his break about an hour later. He grabbed some weights out of his tent that he had just bought. He grabbed four 50 pound weights putting two on each side of the bar. He took off his hoodie revealing a white T-shirt. He then laid on a towel, that he had put in the grass so that his back wouldn't get itchy and distract him from the weights.

He grabbed the bar that had the weights on it, and started to push up and down with his arms. "1, 2, 3, 4..." He said as he lifted the weights. The day went on and the sun was just about to go down. It was now an orange color, and it was amazing. Although it was beautiful, it was still roasting hot. A few hours have passed since he started. It was now 8:00. He started at 1:00. Of course he took breaks in between that were about 2 minutes long. "30, 31, 32, 33, 34, 35." He stopped at 35.

Sweat dripped from his head, and his arms. He didn't care, he needed to get stronger. All the weight lifting he had done this day, you could see his arms becoming very muscular. He sat up and putting the bar down in front of him. He grabbed the towel from under him and stood up. He used the parts of the towel that were not already soaked in sweat to wipe off his face, arms and head.

He picked up the weights again, only this time, he put one on each side of two smaller bars. He was now carrying 100 pounds in each hand. He started to sprint through the forest, and jump off of trees. This was a very effective way to have a more powerful attack in battles. He was pretending the bar of the weights were the handles of his blades and swung the weights every once in a while. He ran almost all night. It got to about 3:00 in the morning when he got back. He cleaned up all his supplies and laid in his tent, and went to sleep.

[Zou ۞]

Your training is impossible to attain. At your current strength, it is impossible to reach 2000 with lifting, even in training. At best, your character can reach perhaps 50.

[Mythik]

Apr 3, 2010 17:29:13 GMT -5 Zou ۞ said:

Your training is impossible to attain. At your current strength, it is impossible to reach 2000 with lifting, even in training. At best, your character can reach perhaps 50.

Does it say not that I can train whatever and still earn TP? I will get to Kidou and such soon don't worry. I just need to work my character up before I do them things.

[Zou ۞]

It says do whatever, but you need to be reasonable. Otherwise you could just invent untold amounts of strength that you just don't have.

[Mythik]

Apr 3, 2010 18:57:38 GMT -5 Zou ۞ said:

It says do whatever, but you need to be reasonable. Otherwise you could just invent untold amounts of strength that you just don't have.

Yes but he's a shinigami, he does have that kind of strength to do that many bench presses. Remember back when Ichigo was training with the Vizards, "With my Reiatsu I can be on the exorcise machine all week without collapsing" He says.

[Zou ۞]

That's exaggeration he's using. Also, even if he could, consider who you're talking about. ICHIGO KUROSAKI! He has double the Reiatsu of a Captain, he has Bankai and a Vizard Mask. He was trained personally by Yoruichi Shihoin and Urahara Kisuke, with some side from Shinji Hirako. All three of those people are former captains. It's no surprise if Ichigo can do it.

[Zou ۞]

Alright, you modified. +20

[Mythik]

[Bakudou 8: Seki]

As the sun rose, the shadow of the night was replaced with the brightness of the sun waking up Mythik. He got out of his tent and went outside. He looked at his dragon while thinking of a kidou to learn. Once one got into his mind, "Blow fire at me, I know what to learn..." He said to the dragon through mental communication. The dragon hesitated, then got on his back two legs. It breathed in heavily, then puffed its cheeks as fire came from its mouth. It was a small ball of fire, and was medium temperature so that it would not burn Mythik.

Mythik rose his fist at the fire ball. "Bakudo No. 8 Seki!" He said as a blue shield went around his fist stopping the ball of fire. He knew that the spell was not only for blocking, but it also paralyzes anything that touches it. Mythik didn't want to use his dragon for that, so he didn't tell his dragon to fly at him. Just after he thought about that, there was a creature in the woods. It wasn't ordinary. It was something you would see in hueco mundo. It was about a foot tal, it looked like a grimlin, and it had a small hole in its chest. It also had a bone mask over its head.

The grimlin hollow thing jumped up at Mythik. Mythik, not thinking of doing the new learned technique, simply jumped over and dodged it. The grimlin then jumped again. "Bakudo No. 8, Seki!" He yelled out flinching and holding his fist up to it. The blue shield thing appeared again. The grimlin jumped straight into it, and it flew back twitching. Soon after about 3 twitches it stopped and was petrified. He knew that the grimlin was soon going to die, because it couldn't breathe, so he dug a hole about its size and burried it.

After that he just kept practicing using it in speed. His dragon would blow fire, and he would block it with Seki. He did this about 10 times before getting tired and taking a break. It took a lot to do kidou, because you had to use reiatsu, and focus a lot. But soon he would be used to it, and be able to do it in a snap. He was still a bit slow at it, and didn't normally think about using it, and just dodged.

[Zou ۞]

+20

[Mythik]

[flashstep]

Mythik stood from his break. He decided that he is going to need speed in order to be an effective captain. He look at his dragon. "Blow fire at me. Make it fast so I can dodge it." He told it mentally. The dragon stood on its back legs. It puffed its cheeks and arched its back. A ball of red flames came from its mouth. It was not hot enough to burn for safety reasons, but it was still fire.

Mythik watched as the fire came closer and closer. In a blink, he quickly vanished. Or did he? He was actually moving fast. It was a form of teleporting in the Soul Society, called flashstep. The fire that had been fired at him had went right passed him. He was now behind the dragon petting it. It was time to go back to the soul society for his training. He picked up all his weapons and strapped them to his sides and in the packs. He had a small communicator in his hand. It was so that he could communicate with the soul society.

"Open up a gate so that we could get through." He said into the communicator. He was using his new found technique to get there faster. It wasn't a hard technique, in fact it was very basic, he just had never learned it. He kept doing flashstep and came to a stop near the outskirts of Karakura. There was a wooden gate with a very bright glow, and had white paper windows, like something you see in a dojo. He flashstepped until he got close to it, and walked through. He was now in Soul Society.

[Zou ۞]

Your paragraphs are too short. Here's a paragraph from your last training. All paragraphs should be about this length, if not greater.

As the sun rose, the shadow of the night was replaced with the brightness of the sun waking up Mythik. He got out of his tent and went outside. He looked at his dragon while thinking of a kidou to learn. Once one got into his mind, "Blow fire at me, I know what to learn..." He said to the dragon through mental communication. The dragon hesitated, then got on his back two legs. It breathed in heavily, then puffed its cheeks as fire came from its mouth. It was a small ball of fire, and was medium temperature so that it would not burn Mythik.

[Mythik]

Modified.

[Zou ۞]

+15