Izayoi - Reworked.

[Rafaela Rafierra]

MOVED

[☾ Aevus | Umbra ☽]

Everything meets minimums or above so let’s jump into your powers.

Overall Kyusekai - First of all i’m gonna say that this is a pretty badass and unique power. So kudos. This marking effect will need a cost though. Lets say 25 reiatsu.

Hunter's Eye View - now this is a cool technique. I’m fine with it and it has my approval. I’d give it a per post cost though. Say 25 reiatsu per post. Mostly because it’s such a simple technique.

Brushstroke - Claw - Is fine.

Ink of Alocana - Eye Crushing Blade - I’d personally change this tbh. I know eyes are your theme but keeping track of how many eyes you have and requiring an eye seems like a huge drawback. You can keep it but i’d recommend another way of keeping the theme. below is an example.

Just say he crushes a mirrored version of a marked targets eye. This destroys the mark on the target but creates a weapon capable of stealing that targets sight if you manage to cut them with it, though to do so requires the weapon to be the same class as the target.

[Rafaela Rafierra]

Update bump.

Both overall Kyusekai and Brushstroke now cost twenty-five reiatsu. The blade technique is still in the process of a totally rework, and I'm still not entirely happy with it. The main reason I wrote it was that his prospective type limits him to one directly offensive technique, and he'd need a flexible-class attack that doesn't rely on his illusions, since illusion resist is a skill anyone could have, and certain defenses exist that can't be pierced without a technique of some sort. And his strength is likely to take a hit anyway, since healing expertise is going to get a moderate investment for story's sake.

Twenty release techniques total mean I'll be trying to include some basics like a movement just for the sake of game balance. For that I apologize.

[Zeich Yajuu]

Just double-checking, since you mentioned that you were making a few tweaks - is this ready for a grading, or are you still making alterations?

[Rafaela Rafierra]

RP sample isn't what I'd like it to be yet. But most of the rest is pretty much set, feel free to rip things apart. Passwords were moved to reason for edits, so that they're not stuck up at the top where anyone can copy them without reading the rules and guides, but can always be moved again.

[☾ Aevus | Umbra ☽]

Overall - “This does not cost any reiatsu. These marks cost twenty-five reiatsu to place, and fade automatically at the end of battle.” I think you need to remove the line about it not costing anything lol. Also on second viewing of this overall, I feel you should add some resistances. An opponent with 50% higher offensive stat should be able to resist this ability all together.

Everything else is fine.

[Rafaela Rafierra]

Screwed up the small details again, I see. Will fix them soon.

Resistance can be added with no problem, it's honestly not likely to get much use in 'hard' combat, for reasons both IC and not. So anything is fine.

[Rafaela Rafierra]

Added a resistance method, which applies to overall and all techniques learned.

[☾ Aevus | Umbra ☽]

"If a target's Pressure plus Energy Sensory, doubled for every point of Illusion Resistance, is higher than Rafaela's lower of Pressure or Reiatsu, all techniques he possesses automatically fail against the subject."

The way you wrote this is a bit confusing at least for me. I'm not sure how energy sensory would play a part for resisting your overall to be honest. In my opinion it should simply be "Targets with 50% offensive stat superiority resist this effect." Or at least something along those lines.

[Rafaela Rafierra]

Because it's a sense that isn't effected by any of the illusion techniques, which are all he gets, it's added to Spiritual Pressure, multiplied if they have any the skill explicitly for resisting that kind of effect, and then compared to the lowest spiritual stat on Rafaela's side.

I don't see it as something to be powered through, but I'll accept it, and go for any OS to resist, checked against half or three quarters of his lower spiritual stat.

[Rafaela Rafierra]

Is it possible for staff to remove this thread from the make a sinner section?

[Kyomei Kuchiki]

Where should it go?

[Rafaela Rafierra]

I think over with the beast clans, that's the closest race for this concept. And I'm just not as interested in Hason after the rule changes hit.

Thank you for the swift response.

[Kyomei Kuchiki]

Done

[Rafaela Rafierra]

Thank you for moving this.

I made the edits, so this is officially done migrating.