Saika Tech's

[Shawn Rabuburēdo]

Saika Techniques

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{Merge and Seal}
Technique Name: Merge & Seal

Class: 7

Technique Type: Hell Art

Usable By ): Saika

Technique Element: Reiatsu

Technique Description and Effects (Explain appearance, powers, and effect):
This is the Precursor to the Unseal Saika Techniques. Saiki being one of the weakest and most restricted Hell Race struggled to find ways to reach the top, only a few have ever reached that height. Finally after decades of searching, a Technique made its way into the depths that showed Saika a way to increase their power tenfold. This Technique uses their connection to hell and how it targets them more than any other race. Taking a piece of hell and forcefully merging it with their own soul while sealing its power allows them to wield a strength never seen by them before. With this new found ability, the Saika have nothing but themselves holding them back.

How to use technique (How is it activated?):
Forcing a small piece of hell to merge with your soul and sealing it, after this there is nothing else you need to do.

Technique Drawbacks (Limitations, repercussions for use, etc)
In order to learn this Technique you must write a training thread (solo or joint) and if you choose this technique to start with this thread must be your first thread. This technique must be mastered at first chance and learning this technique causes excruciating pain which must be in the thread. Once this Technique is acquired all light aura is removed and dark aura becomes 100. Must have a 1 in Calm Mind and a 1 in either Pain Tolerance or Strength of Will.

Made By: Some Random Saika

Reserved? (Yes/No) (Can others use your technique, or just your character?): No

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{Unseal: Revitalize}
Technique Name: Unseal: Revitalize

Class: 3

Technique Type: Hell Art

Usable By ): Saika

Technique Element: Reiatsu

Technique Description and Effects (Explain appearance, powers, and effect):
When used, this technique cover’s the user’s body with Hell Fire that heals the user of all physical wounds (excluding organs and anything that causes instant death) before dissipating.

How to use technique (How is it activated?):
Pouring Reiatsu into the Endless seal of the user’s soul which holds the portion of hell while concentrating on the effect causes it to burst violently outward with HellFire covering the body before dissipating.

Technique Drawbacks (Limitations, repercussions for use, etc)
This Technique causes intense pain during both the initial burst and as the Hell Fire covers the body. Once used, the time the user can spend outside is halved and can only be used once per thread. Must have mastered Merge and Seal. 400 Reiatsu activation cost.

Made By: Some Random Saika

Reserved? (Yes/No) (Can others use your technique, or just your character?): No

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{Unseal: Hell Step}
Technique Name: Unseal: Hell Step

Class: 6

Technique Type: Hell Art

Usable By ): Saika

Technique Element: Reiatsu

Technique Description and Effects (Explain appearance, powers, and effect):
Black flame sprouts from the bottom of the user’s feet, this allows standing in the air (regardless of location as it uses Hell reiatsu) and can be used to open and use Hell portals in order to increase a single step by 15 times the users speed up to 40 feet (a portal opens where the user exits). These portals open immediately and closes instantly after the user enters/exits them. 

How to use technique (How is it activated?):
Pouring Reiatsu into the Gate seal of the user’s soul which holds the portion of hell while concentrating on the effect forces Hell Reiatsu into the users feet.

Technique Drawbacks (Limitations, repercussions for use, etc)
While using this Technique the feet feel as if they are on fire and this sensation stops two personal posts after use, the user also feel as if they walk through fire every time a Hell portal is opened and stepped through. Every time this is used the amount of posts that can be outside of Hell is reduced by one and if used to stand in the air it reduces the amount of posts outside of Hell by half a post after for each post after initial activation. Must have mastered Merge and Seal. This cost 50 Reiatsu to activate (for poth Hell Portal and standing in air) and 25 Reiatsu for each additional post.

Made By: Some Random Saika

Reserved? (Yes/No) (Can others use your technique, or just your character?): No

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{Unseal: Undead Grip}
Technique Name: Unseal: Undead Grip

Class: 5

Technique Type: Hell Art

Usable By ): Saika

Technique Element: Reiatsu

Technique Description and Effects (Explain appearance, powers, and effect):
When used, this technique summons one of the hands (and arm) that opens the gate of Hell, flooding Hell Reiatsu into the hand of chose thus connecting it to the summoned hand. This hand is summoned next to the user and has a reach of 25 feet with a speed of 250 or the users base speed (Whichever is faster), it also has a strength of 250.

How to use technique (How is it activated?):
Pouring Reiatsu into the Beast seal of the user’s soul which holds the portion of hell while concentrating on the effect causes it to rush Hell’s Reiatsu into the user’s hand while opening a portal to Hell while summoning a hand from the gate of Hell.

Technique Drawbacks (Limitations, repercussions for use, etc)
Thanks to the power flooding into the hands the user experiences pain in their arms as if they were being crushed. Upon activation the user loses a post to stay outside of Hell and for every additional post the user loses 1 post. The user must be within 30 feet of the summoned hand or it will recede back into Hell. Must have mastered Merge and Seal. Costs 100 Reiatsu to activate and 50 Reiatsu for every additional post.

Made By: Some Random Saika

Reserved? (Yes/No) (Can others use your technique, or just your character?): No

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{Unseal: Feel My Pain}
Technique Name: Unseal: Feel My Pain

Class: 4

Technique Type: Hell Art

Usable By ): Saika

Technique Element: Reiatsu

Technique Description and Effects (Explain appearance, powers, and effect):
Hell Reiatsu floods out and covers an area 30 feet around and extends 30 feet into the air. Anyone who touches this reiatsu has all pain receptors connected to the user of this Technique and all pain the user feel is doubled and sent to those touching the reiatsu. If the user were cut then those touching the reiatsu would feel as if they were cut, this however also extends to the pain affiliated with using other techniques. This Reiatsu moves with the user forming a constant 30 foot radius. If pain is inflicted past the pain tolerance level for 3 posts in succession then the one being effect to such a degree will pass out. 

How to use technique (How is it activated?):
Pouring reiatsu into the Tolerance seal of the user’s soul which holds the portion of hell while concentrating on the effect causes Hell reiatsu floods outward into a 30 foot radius.    

Technique Drawbacks (Limitations, repercussions for use, etc)
The user must inflict pain on themselves in order to cause pain to those who touch the Reiatsu, they must also be touching the Reiatsu for it to work. Activating causes the user to lose 3 posts they can stay outside while losing an additional 1 post for every following post it remains active. Must have mastered Merge and Seal. Costs 150 Reiatsu to activate and 50 for every additional post.

Made By: Some Random Saika

Reserved? (Yes/No) (Can others use your technique, or just your character?): No

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{Unseal: Consuming Fire}
Technique Name: Unseal: Consuming Fire

Class: 3

Technique Type: Hell Art

Usable By ): Saika

Technique Element: Reiatsu

Technique Description and Effects (Explain appearance, powers, and effect):
HellFire explodes out of the user to form a shield 1 foot all around the user, this flame consumes ranged reiatsu based attacks as well as stopping shockwaves. The user gains half the reiatsu absorbed this way (excluding shockwaves). 

How to use technique (How is it activated?):
Pouring reiatsu into the Devouring seal of the user’s soul which holds the portion of hell while concentrating on the effect causes HellFire to explode out of the user 1 foot in all directions not being blocked (walls,ground,etc).

Technique Drawbacks (Limitations, repercussions for use, etc)
This only stops ranged reiatsu and shockwave attacks Class 4 and below. The user experiences the pain of the blocked attack as if it succeeded but takes no actual damage. Activating causes the user to lose 5 posts they can stay outside of Hell. Must have mastered Merge and Seal. It only lasts long enough to block said attack and cost 300 Reiatsu to activate.

Made By: Some Random Saika

Reserved? (Yes/No) (Can others use your technique, or just your character?): No

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{Unseal: Torment}
Technique Name: Unseal: Torment

Class: 2

Technique Type: Hell Art

Usable By ): Saika

Technique Element: Reiatsu

Technique Description and Effects (Explain appearance, powers, and effect):
A special pressure is emitted from the user that reaches out about 50 feet, those who enter this area witness their deepest fear causing severe mental distress. This Hell infused pressure also halves the effectiveness of Step Techniques (If a technique increased a step by 10x then it would become 5x). 

How to use technique (How is it activated?):
Pouring reiatsu into the Fear seal of the user’s soul which holds the portion of hell while concentrating on the effect which causes a special Hell reiatsu infused spiritual pressure to replace their own.

Technique Drawbacks (Limitations, repercussions for use, etc)
The user experiences lacerations that are instantly healed as the Hell Pressure pours out and those who enter this field who have 100 light aura or 3 points in Lack of Fear are immune to this effect. The area that creates is static and does not move with the user, rather it takes the Hell Pressure rushing out of the user and fills up the area that was created upon activation. This however halves the effectiveness of their own Step Techs rounded down(15x would be lessened to 7x etc.). Activating causes the user to lose 3 posts they can stay outside and 1 post for every additional post. Must have mastered Merge and Seal. This cost 400 Reiatsu to activate and 200 for every additional post.

Made By: Some Random Saika

Reserved? (Yes/No) (Can others use your technique, or just your character?): No

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{Unseal: Demon Seal}
Technique Name: Unseal: Demon Seal

Class: 1

Technique Type: Hell Art

Usable By ): Saika

Technique Element: Reiatsu

Technique Description and Effects (Explain appearance, powers, and effect):
When the seal breaks the beast comes out to play. Activating this technique summons a 15 foot tall Guardian from the gates off hell (in other words it summons the gate which opens and releases the Guardian) which resembles a beast with two goat legs with the upper body of a human , the head is that of a human as well with two curved horns and the mouth of a lion, the user gains control of the best and is capable of controlling it with their mind. The Guardian has a Strength of 600, a Speed of 600, a Reiatsu Strength of 200, a Spiritual Pressure of 0, Instinct of 400, Senses of 200, Energy Sensory of 200, and gains 4 points in Anti-Stealth (Doesn't give off any Dark or Light Aura and has no Healing Expertise). This Guardian feels no pain and heals all damage inflicted to it instantly making it the perfect guard dog while being immune to illusions and fear (Thanks to the control the user has over it they are also immune to any other being controlling them). Thanks to the Hell Reiatsu pouring from the guardian it is able to stand in the air no matter the location, making it very difficult to escape. 

How to use technique (How is it activated?):
Pouring Reiatsu into all six seals of the user’s soul which holds the portion of hell destroys the seals and lets the Hell Reiatsu run free summoning a Hell Guardian from the gates of Hell for you to control.

Technique Drawbacks (Limitations, repercussions for use, etc)
Activation causes the user to experience a pain they have never felt before, a pain that puts them a hair breadth away from death without physically damaging the user. After activation the user has only 3 posts where this technique stays activated, immediately after the Technique ends it drags the user back to Hell (this will not extend the time you can stay out of Hell). The user also loses all points in Calm Mind, Energy Sense, and Anti-Stealth while this technique is activated. Once back in Hell after the use of this technique, the process of resealing the Hell Reiatsu must be done again via a Solo Training thread that has to be a minimum of 12 paragraphs. Nothing can be done until this Training thread is done, upon finishing this thread the time the user can remain outside of Hell is halved. To avoid the decrease in time one can remain outside a second Joint Training thread must be completed, it must be at least one page dedicated to ensuring the seal is perfect. Must have mastered Merge and Seal. This costs 1000 reiatsu on activation.

Made By: Some Random Saika

Reserved? (Yes/No) (Can others use your technique, or just your character?): No

[Kyomei Kuchiki]

For Merge and Seal, I don't understand why being Training Tier is a requirement for the technique, but it's not necessarily prohibiting it from being approved.

In Drawbacks for Revitalize, please put "Standard Reiatsu Cost" unless it has a custom reiatsu cost, in which case put that cost.

Please list a per-post cost for Standing on Hell Step Flames and a per-step cost for using the Portals. Also, what is the limit on the Portal? Is it a true teleportation ability, where the physical distance isn't crossed unlike Shunpo where you just move really fast? And what is the range of the "step"? Is there any charging time required to open the portal or is it just a flash of movement?

See Placidus, the Akki Step Tech, for reference and inspiration

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{Placidus}
Technique Name: [Placidus]

Class: [4]

Technique Type: [Other]

Technique Element: [None]

Technique Description and Effects:

This is the Akki step technique. While Akki can use step techniques from other races, this technique is particularly devastating because it belongs to them. This is the unique Akki ability for stepping.

What this technique does is allow the Akki to phase briefly in and out of their current plain of existence. In other words, they momentarily disappear, blinking out of existence. As they do, a flash of black explodes outwards. Anyone that witnesses them blinking out of existence will suddenly see nothing but blackness for that split second. It is hardly enough to affect the battle, but rather it is theatrical. The Akki, during that brief second, is gone, and cannot be attacked. This is a direct "teleportation," unlike Shunpo or Sonido, which are merely fast movement.

Averagely, this is performed at 15x the user's speed, making it one of the fastest individual steps. It is also known to be able to move forwards within three small steps rather than one. It can also be done for one. If done in three, the same distance is covered in three smaller steps, creating a theatrical flash of black with each appearance and disappearance. Additionally, there is a flash of white light when the Akki reappears and blinks back into existence. Any who witness this flash of light will suddenly see hallucinations of horrible monstrosities and new body features on the Akki in question that uses this technique, and their fear of the individual will increase.

How to use technique:

Like all step techniques, this one requires a simple step as well. It is done for 200 reiatsu per use, which is why most Akki prefer to use the steps of other races. It is an expensive step technique, but is easily one of the most powerful.

Technique Drawbacks

Reiatsu cost.

Made By: [Admin]

Undead Grip is far far too strong for a Class 5 technique. 600/600 Speed/Strength or 2x/2x bonus if it's greater is closer to a Class 2 technique and would need far more drawbacks and costs. I recommend just a flat 250/250 speed/strength at its current class, and please list the reiatsu cost in the drawbacks whether it is standard or activation+per-post cost.


Feel My Pain has some conflicting numbers. "Hell Reiatsu floods out and covers an area 30 feet around and extends 30 feet into the air. " "This Reiatsu moves with the user forming a constant 50 foot radius " "Pouring reiatsu into the fourth seal of the user’s soul which holds the portion of hell causes Hell reiatsu floods outward into a 50 foot radius."

Is it 30 feet or 50 feet? Additionally, give it an activation cost and a per-post cost.


How long does Consuming Fire last?


I'm going to have to deny Torment in its current state. It's hard to balance mental torment and physical torment drawback while also deactivating step techniques. Even for Class 2, which the reiatsu cost would be tremendous for, it just seems to do too much while not explaining how it does all those things effectively.

Final Seal. Hmm... How to describe it. While it's very cool, it just summons a being too powerful for a non-release technique. I wouldn't pass this kind of power in a Top level Release, like Bankai or Segunda Etapa, much less a non-release technique. Yes, it has drawbacks. But it doesn't really. Yes, lots of pain. But other than that, it summons a creature that would be able to destroy just about anyone I can think of off the top of my head due to it's incredible stats. 1000 speed is more than enough to get to someone, 1000 strength is enough to kill them in one hit, the Sensory stats are enough to make sure it can detect anything, react to anything, and ensure its hit lands true. Basically, it's a OHKO technique that lasts for 5 posts. Also, it's invincible and can't be destroyed or controlled. So, while you've put a lot of effort into describing a cool technique, I can't pass it in its current state.

[Shawn Rabuburēdo]

I have made asked for changes

[Kyomei Kuchiki]

Undead grip is still too fast. A double boost to speed is too high for a class 5 technique. Should also cost more reiatsu to sustain it.

Feel my pain should also not have a 1/3 cut to reiatsu cost for sustaining.

Consuming Fire should not cost less than 400 reiatsu. It's strong for a class 3 technique and shouldn't have nearly half the standard cost for that class.

Torment similarly should cost at least 600 reiatsu and should require more to sustain it. It's a much better technique now.

Demon Seal looks much better now as well.

[Shawn Rabuburēdo]

Oct 10, 2020 21:14:39 GMT -5 Kyomei Kuchiki said:

Undead grip is still too fast. A double boost to speed is too high for a class 5 technique. Should also cost more reiatsu to sustain it.

Feel my pain should also not have a 1/3 cut to reiatsu cost for sustaining.

Consuming Fire should not cost less than 400 reiatsu. It's strong for a class 3 technique and shouldn't have nearly half the standard cost for that class.

Torment similarly should cost at least 600 reiatsu and should require more to sustain it. It's a much better technique now.

Demon Seal looks much better now as well.

I fixed undead grip as i forgot i originally had the double speed and intended to remove it.

As for the rest i ask if it's possible to remain the lower reiatsu costs as the costs are more heavily focused on out of hell posts instead as the techniques draw their power from Hell more then from the one using it. If you would prefer me to raise the reiatsu cost still i will.

As for Torment it is the same as the above reason plus the fact it effects the user and is relatively easy to escape.

[Kyomei Kuchiki]

I can work with that. I do believe I notice that you raised reiatsu costs slightly from where they previously had been and also have the out of hell posts drawback.

1/2 approved.

[Col Arana]

Apologies for taking so frigging long on this one. Having perused them, I'm going to back Kyo here. 2/2



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