Developments of Izanami

[Izanami Midorikawa]

Technique Name: Air Cannon
Class: 7,4,1
Technique Type: Human World Dweller
Usable By: Fullbringers
Technique Element: Air Soul

Technique Description and Effects: Commanding the air around them to converge around a specified area the wind condenses then compresses in on itself similar to a spring. Once released the air is fired off from the user as a projectile capable of either pushing back or piercing through a target. Across all stages the air when compressed around the user acts as a pseudo defense pushing back anything that doesn’t have a superior force from that section of the user.

Class 7: Commanding the air around a single finger the user is able to fire off this stage of the technique in the same manner as a handgun. The air fired from around the finger can travel up to one hundred feet in a straight line piercing through anything that doesn’t have the durability to stop it, then continuing onward to the remaining distance.

Class 4: Focusing the air of the surrounding area to whirl around a hand of choice this stage functions on a larger scale than the previous sending out the compressed air around the user’s hand forward in a circular wave shape forward, striking everything in a straight line. The scale of the blast is roughly the size of a large car.

Class 1: The most powerful stage that is easily noticeable as the air of the surrounding area surrounds an entire arm of the user’s choice constantly swirling around looking like a savage tornado. It’s at this point that the air is fired off on the scale of a missile demolishing buildings, clearing streets clean and even leaving entire city blocks clear from the massive blast of air.

How to use technique: Nami commands the air around her to gather, spin, condense then launch off the designated spot of her arm towards her target.

Technique Drawbacks: The major worry when employing this technique comes from a type of backlash on the user. Present across all stages of the technique the air while swirling around the user does inflict cuts on them as well. Class 7 causes only minor irritating cuts similar to those inflicted by a shaving razor. Class 4 causes much more serious wounds to appear resembling those inflicted by a knife slightly bigger than a pocket style. Finally class 1 should never be used recklessly as it doesn’t inflict a single cut like the other stages but instead several that are severe like those inflicted by a large blade, resulting in major bleeding and pain.
Reiatsu Costs
Class 7: 10 - Class 4: 100 - Class 1: 500

Made By: Izanami Midorikawa
Reserved: Yes


Technique Name: Soul Fragmentation
Class: 2
Technique Type: Human World Dweller
Usable By: Fullbringers
Technique Element: Soul

Technique Description and Effects: Pushing the boundaries of interacting with the soul of the environment, Nami begins this technique by commanding the soul of the earth near her to take on her image. This doesn’t need to be the ground specifically as any earth like material can work such as concrete, cement, crystal, ore, etc. Taking only a few moments the substance will rise up forming into Nami’s shape, size and coloration. It’s at this point that Nami implants a small fragment of her soul bonding it with the soul of the substance, establishing a type of double that possesses Nami’s skills, stats, knowledge and Fullbring (weapon form only). The double can be used to scout, fight or relay information primarily. Perhaps the most useful aspect of the double is when they’re either destroyed which can be accomplished when they suffer any severe damage, once destroyed everything the double experienced is transferred to Nami as if she lived through it herself as her soul fragment returns to her. Once Mastered the amount of doubles that can be established goes from three to seven at once.

These doubles of Nami although possessing her memories, personality, fighting style,etc are far more limited compared to her as they cannot employ actual techniques beyond purely physical ones and basic Soul Command. The aspects of all doubles are the same as they all possess the same Instincts, Senses, Energy Sensory and Healing Expertize as Nami although those pertaining to combat are different. The Strength and Speed of the doubles are limited to 150 making them stronger than the typical person although weaker than most of the physically spiritually gifted. The Reiatsu Strength and Spiritual Pressure also match Nami’s meaning that the Fullbring they possess can clash against other spiritual weapons or harm anyone with Spiritual Pressure that Nami herself can.

How to use technique: Nami utilizes Soul Command on the environment and herself mixing both souls together.

Technique Drawbacks: Costs 600 reiatsu per double. When a double is destroyed a small degree of the damage that was inflicted upon them is transferred back to Nami. A cut off limb will result in Nami suffering a cut in the same location several centimetres deep. Broken bones result in fractures, etc.

Made By: Izanami Midorikawa
Reserved: Yes

[Col Arana]

For Air Cannon:

Class: 7,4,12

I am assuming you do not mean this to be a Class 12 technique, but what I'm not certain of is whether you intended this to be a Class 1, 2 or both. I'm guessing Class 1 by the way you've formatted the technique, but this is still something you'll want to address. In fact you may want to take a general reread of this, I'm noticing a lot of formatting errors and typos as I go along.

As far as costs for the technique, at Class 4 and 1 costs should be higher, more in-line with the standard cost of techniques of that Class. Due to the backlash drawback, I'm fine with lessening the cost slightly, more comparable to costs of techniques of one class lower. 100 Reiatsu for the Class 4 variant, and 500 reiatsu for the Class 1 variant would be my suggestion.

Soul Fragmentation

This should definitely have a cost equivalent to a Class 2 technique (600). I also would advise an upkeep cost to maintain your doubles.

[Izanami Midorikawa]

Edited

[Col Arana]

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[Shizuka Sanamizu ✮]

Air Cannon:

Class 7: Commanding the air around a single finger the user is able to fire off this stage of the technique in the same manner as a handgun. The air fired from around the finger can travel up to one hundred feet in a straight line piercing through anything that doesn’t have the durability to stop it, then continuing onward to the remaining distance.

You mention it pierces through anything with insufficient durability, but there is no mention of what that durability would mean. I understand the Strength stat is interchangeable with durability, a lot of the time, but these attack is also highly based off of what I imagine would be the overall highest OS. If that's the case, rather than say durability, I think keeping it at OS would be easier to keep track of. I would also probably change where this information is located since you don't mention anything about durability in the other class portions, so just add it to the description and effects.


Additionally, I would add a bit to the Class 1 version for drawbacks. Since it's such a big thing and causes massive damage, I would argue that this can't be used more than 2-3 times per thread (depending on mastery, but 3 is the max) without actual loss of use of the limb.



Soul Fragmentation:

You still need to add a per-post cost like what Col suggested to maintain the doubles. I know you can have up to 7, but I'm still going to argue that you'd lose 50 per double per post to maintain them. Alternatively, you can have a cost of 150 per post no matter how many you have out at once.

[Col Arana]

As it has been over a month since the last staff response, and there has been no answer, we are going to be dropping this out of the mod queue. Please re-report this thread when you are ready for us to look at it again.