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Post by Shizuka Sanamizu ✮ on Apr 11, 2020 17:30:40 GMT -5
Hey! I see you're wanting a type change and you have some power updates. That's fine, but I need a few things from you that I don't see in this CIU. According to Section 4 of the rules:
"Type changes must have a strong In-Character reason. At least three threads showing the development of a character towards the path the user has chosen are required."
That being said, please show me these three threads and quote the exact points in them where the character development portrayed an appropriate amount of evidence towards a type change. Once you do that, I'll look over the rest for a full grading!
Post by Aura Kyuketsuki on Apr 22, 2020 1:16:20 GMT -5
Alrighty, the evidence has been planted, and made an additional change before all the grading took place concerning rank. Wanted to see if the amount is sufficient, to upgrade Aura from a Mercenary Rank 1 to Mercenary Rank 2.
Beyond that, the quotes have been put in large chunks to hopefully make it easier to spot them if there is any reading needed to be done too.