Kitai's Shop Item Revamp, pt2

[Kitai Yoru]

Name: Poison Mist (cartridge)

Description: A cartridge with two shots. When used, this will spay poisonous purple gas in the given direction. After two seperate posts of exposure to the poison, it Will start to kill targets. After six of the users posts, they will die. After being exposed to the poison once, the user will start to suffer the effects of the poison. The first post, nothing happens to them. The second, it begins to cause internal bleeding, making it hard for those with a post of pain resistance to maneuver. At the third, the pain ramps up further, requiring a two in pain resistance to move. The second time one is exposed to the poison, the death timer will start, but will not increase the pain resistance requirement. Poison cloud dissipates after five of the user's posts.

Class:3

Item Type: Combat item

Item Power (IP): n/a

Offense Type: n/a

Durability: 200

Bonuses: n/a

Drawbacks: If the wrist launcher is destroyed while this is inside it, the cartridge will explode on the user. Can only be used with 'Wrist Launcher'. Exposure posts can only be removed with an antidote, appropriate healing technique, or HE of 250+.

Cost: 1500

Crafting Skills: 3 in Crafting

Donated to Urahara's: No

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Name: Pepper Spray (Cartridge)

Description: A two use cartridge. When used, this will spay a large amount of white gas, that hangs in the air for 3 posts. The gas is pepper spray, and getting hit with it will stun opponents without pain resistance for a post. At 300 or more Senses, a 2 in Pain Resistance is needed, and at 400 or more Senses, a 3 is needed. Senses beyond 500 cannot resist this.. With 2 in pain resistance, one can ignore the pain from the gas. User is not immune to the effects of Pepper Spray.

Class: 5

Item Type: Combat item

Item Power (IP): n/a

Offense Type: Physical

Durability: 200

Bonuses: n/a

Drawbacks: If the wrist launcher is destroyed while this is inside it, the cartridge will explode on the user. Can only be used with 'Wrist Launcher'.

Cost: 1500 for five

Crafting Skills: 3 in Crafting

Donated to Urahara's: No

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Name: Spider Wannabe (Cartridge)

Description: Five shot cartridge. Fires highly durable webbing in pointed direction, to either ensnare targets, or can be fired like string to grab at things. Net size is ten feet wide in a circular area, and the rope is twenty feet long.

Class: 5-1

Item Type: Combat item

Item Power (IP): 400+100 per class (800 max)

Offense Type: physical

Durability: 200

Bonuses: User is immune to webbing for two posts. Item Power(ip) acts as web durability. Durability is halved against bladed weapons

Drawbacks: If the wrist launcher is destroyed while this is inside it, the cartridge will explode on the user. Webbing loses 200 durability for every post after the one it was created in. After it hits 0 durability, it disappears.

Cost: 2000+500 per class for five

Crafting Skills: 3 in Crafting

Donated to Urahara's: No

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Name: Bionic limb

Description: An artificial limb for those who would rather get a stronger metal one for the one they just lost, or for those preparing themselves for when the machines finally take over. This limb can either be used to replace a missing one, or can be fused to the body wherever the user wishes it to be placed, giving the user a 'leg up', on the competition. The speed of these limbs are equal to the speed of the user

Class: 5-1

Item Type: Weapon/Armor/Utility

Item Power (IP): 500+100 per class (Max 800)

Offense Type: Physical

Durability: 1200

Bonuses: Can be upgraded through Kitai's 'Bionic' items. For 100 reiatsu, the arm is able to move at a speed of 600 for a post.

Drawbacks: Can only have four limbs at a time. Can only have five upgrades at a time. Cannot create shockwaves outside of techniques

Cost: 3000+2000 per class.

Crafting Skills: 3 in Crafting

Donated to Urahara's: No

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Name: The sensor

Description: A Bionic replacement for either the eye or ear, used to replace unwanted parts of yourself. Its sensory stat is equal to its IP.

Class: 5-1

Item Type: Tool/Utility

Item Power (IP): 50+25 per class (Max 250)

Offense Type:n/a

Durability: 200+25 per class (Max 400)

Bonuses: Can be upgraded with certain 'Bionic' Kitai made items, does not transfer the pain that having high senses normally gives you. Can have three appropriate upgrades at a time.

Drawbacks: Shuts off from flashbangs, electric based abilities, or anything that would normally affect someone with over 500 senses. Can be reactivated after three posts. Unpowered, this item acts only as 50, and requires 75 per post power it to its max.

Cost: 2000+500 per class.

Crafting Skills: 3 in Crafting

Donated to Urahara's: No

[Shizuka Sanamizu ✮]

Poison Mist:

• Bring the durability down to 100.

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Pepper Spray:

• This durability should be 100, too.

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Spider Wannabe:

• Keep the same mechanics but have this one start at 300 durability.

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Bionic limb:

• This durability should start at a lower number at Class 7. I think starting at 200 would be fine and it gains 100 points per every Class-up.

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The sensor:

• Keep the mechanics here for durability, as well, but have it start at 200.

[Kitai Yoru]

Cartridge items: Changed all of them to 200. I am hoping for a middle ground, since Acid Shot and Napalm Blast were approved at 300.

Spider Wannabe: After rereading the items, I realized that I forgot to write the IP as the durability of the webbing, and have changed it to such. I also changed the max IP to 800, but made it so the webbing loses 200 per post at all ranks. I also changed the class of the item.

Bionic Limb: Increased the class minimum to 5, and changed the scaling to keep the max at 800 at class 1.

Bionic sensor: Lowered the durability, increased the classes to keep with scaling

[Shizuka Sanamizu ✮]

I'm fine with middle ground. Everything else looks good!

[Zeich Yajuu]

Poison Mist - Make the number of posts to kill someone a number of posts that they're exposed to the gas, not just one hit and go. Exposure posts can only be removed with an antidote, appropriate healing technique, or HE of 250+. To compensate for this, poison gas can last for five posts, and the use of multiple cartridges can speed up the poisoning process (standing in two clouds' worth will inflict two exposure posts per turn, for example).

Because this is a purely lethal item, let's increase Class to 3, and cost to 1500 each, not per 5.


Pepper Spray - "The higher the senses of those struck with this, the more burning agony they'll go through. For every 100 points in senses past 200, the more points in pain resistance you'll need to continue fighting. At 2 in pain resistance, you can continue fighting past the gas" This should probably be reworded slightly. Replace the bolded section with "At 300 or more Senses, a 2 in Pain Resistance is needed, and at 400 or more Senses, a 3 is needed. Senses beyond 500 cannot resist this."


Spider Wannabe - I'm going to roll my eyes at this but move on. I think that durability should be halved against bladed weapons, not doubled, as they'd be able to cut through the strands. Also, while you list uses for the webbing (nets to grab people, string to grab objects), is there a limit on size? I know we have five uses, but how big can a "use" get?


Bionic Limb - Gotta say no on Speed being based on IP, rather than the user's Speed. Since they should be attached to the user's nerves to work at all, they should still use the user's speed, and only have their own IP/Durability.


The Sensor - Again, giving people artificial stat boosts based on IP is iffy, especially since it allows you to hardcore min/max by selecting bionic equipment for dump stats or stats lowered by Type. Now, unlike the limb, these numbers are actually more reasonable, so all I'm going to ask is that there is a Reiatsu cost per post of using these senses as opposed to your own. Set it at 75/post, and I'll be good with it. Also I think that electricity should short-circuit it on a direct hit.

Most of these should be pretty straightforward updates, then we can get these rolled out.

[Kitai Yoru]

Poison Mist: Gotta say, I'm not understanding what you're saying about exposure posts. Mostly why it would take more than one hit. Added the ways to cure it that you mentioned though, as well as the 1500 per cartridge

Pepper spray: Added "At 300 or more Senses, a 2 in Pain Resistance is needed, and at 400 or more Senses, a 3 is needed. Senses beyond 500 cannot resist this" to replace "The higher the senses of those struck with this, the more burning agony they'll go through. For every 100 points in senses past 200, the more points in pain resistance you'll need to continue fighting", and reworded the bold that you mentioned

Spider Wannabe: I'm keeping the original names for all of them, no matter how silly they may or may not have been, to both acknowledge their older versions, and because it's easier than making a entirely new name. Added sizes to the webbing, and made it half instead of doubled against blades

Bionic limb: Although I changed as requested, I would like to ask, seeing as the older version of the item was approved at 600 speed, if I could adjust it to something similar, seeing as though it's connected to nerves, that would more be connected to instinct and senses

The Sensor: Added a powered and unpowered state that gives the user 50 base without having to pay for it

[Zeich Yajuu]

When I say exposure posts, I mean the amount of times they've been affected by the poison. The reason we can't make it a "once it hits, there's a countdown to death" is because that pretty much makes it a delayed death with very little resistance aside from dodging or being a healer (or being super prepared). That's why I was suggesting multiple exposures to lead to auto-death. We can of course reel back the numbers and play with it a bit, but more to the point, it should not be one exposure leading to death. Perhaps a single exposure is enough to cause internal bleeding and other severe damage, but it shouldn't be death.

I'm not asking you to change names, I'm just rolling my eyes. That's just me being me. But Pepper Spray and Spider Wannabe are good.

Bionic Limb - The thing is, even if it's connected to them, nerves are what would cause it to actually trigger. This essentially gives you a 600 speed limb when most people run around 300, meaning it's like a constant non-existent 2x boost. Now, if you want to add a speed boost for a small Reiatsu cost (say 100 Reiatsu to make the limb move at 600 speed for one post), I'd be down with that.

Sensor is good now, has my thumbs up.

[Kitai Yoru]

Changed how poison functions, added a one post boost for the limb for 100

[Zeich Yajuu]